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When Vinyl and Octavia first meet on the streets of Manehattan it seems that they have little in common. Octavia is a part of a prestigious String Quartet and a graduate of Canterlot's most acclaimed music school. Vinyl, on the other hand, is a young street musician, playing and living on the dirty streets of the low-end part of the city, trying to survive harsh winters without shelter. But there is a one thing they share that binds them together in spite of everything: music. And thus their story unfolds. But with all of the struggles they face and the secrets they keep, can two ponies who are so different ever find peace with each other and, more importantly, with themselves?

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Good, but try not to put this into the generic Vinyl X Octavia category

201833 Thanks for all the feedback! I'll fix those mistakes you mentioned. The thinking thing was because I originally wrote in it in Word and I forgot to reitallicize when i copied and pasted.. :) and feel free to keep being my editor in later chapters. I'm terrible about editing... I'm a writer, but I get really lazy about the editing.
Cheers!

Once again, very nice

nice looken good so far.

203942 Thank you for being so helpful. That's a good tip about the OC's... I'll try to remember, though I don't think there are going to be very many more important, reoccurring OC's in the story... But I'll definitely remember that for future stories. :scootangel:

I was suspecting gang rape... But assault is just as nice:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

(I'm kidding of course)

Death to Forte!:twilightangry2::flutterrage:

204637 haha! if there was going to be any gang rape (which there definitely won't be :/) it would be more logical to happen at Vinyl's end of the story. :pinkiecrazy:

Great chapter, I mean seriously brilliant. I can't wait to read more, although the whole "Dope" bit was a bit mental, especially considering the dancer had casual sex (I'm guessing that's what you were implying) with a 15 year old. And I thought dope was marijuana and you smoke it? Other than that it was awesome and I really want the next chapter to come out ASAP!:pinkiehappy:

aw, poor vinyl D:

anyways, great story so far :twilightsmile:

I honestly don't understand why this is any less than four and a half stars. There are some occasional typos, but your writing is superb. I can't wait to read more.

218341 I proofread, but I miss a lot of things :/ I'm a pretty good writer, but I'm a terrible editor... and I'm awful about typos because my brain works at, like, a thousand miles an hour and I get ahead of myself and type the wrong word...

Good job kinda sad seeing Vinyl as an addict though.:pinkiesick::fluttershysad::ajsleepy:

221462 Well, if it makes you sad then I'm doing my job :P Don't worry too much... She'll be fine.

Hard not to like this. Its nice to see an original take on scratchtavia. Better than anything I could come up with

227171 I've been working on this story for a while, so I actually have a lot written and I'm just trying to space out my posts so it's not overwhelming.

It also helps that I am currently unemployed and not starting school up again until the fall...

227579Oh......... Well bad for you but good for us think about releasing an update every day?:trixieshiftright:hmmmm?

228225 I think that replied to the wrong post... >.< mine, not yours...

I have the same problem with word myself it just comes out goofy, and I know what it's like trying to micromanage every mistake, still a very good story so far keep up the good work

And then they FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF- called room service...:yay:

234210 I thought it was Vinyl?

Is it bad that ive been laughing my ass off at vinyls part of the story? I just find to so funny when drugs get thrown into the MLP universe lulz.

240198 umm... kind of... but that's ok. As long as you're enjoying yourself.

ooooo looks like fun this is good continue plzzzz

TO be fair, I like this story. Interesting way to portray it. And a lot less innocent, which is nice. Plus, when you leave a train, you DISEMBARK. Deboard i'm not sure is a word. And Conceded* near the end of the argument.

270621 I asked my Dad when I wrote that. He said it was deboard. I thought disembark too, but he said that's what the train does when it leave the station, not what it does when you get off of it.

272603 She was using her magic. But honestly, how do ponies play pianos or cellos without fingers? -alien hands-
Muffins"
yeah, it was shorter this time because I had more in it, but then I decided that it needed a chapter break. :)
I don't know about the Equestria Daily thing. I worry about people being judgmental of my headcanons.

This is one of my favorite stories on the site. :rainbowkiss:

275150 awww, thanks! that's really sweet! :)

My only complaint is how long it is between chapters :fluttercry:

276007 Sorry about that... I got caught up in role playing and forgot to post. I'll try to be more regular with my posts.

You have the kind of writing I can only dream of having it's captivating and awesome! This story leaves me craving more to the point of begging for it not to end just yet. Great job I defiantly look forward to the next update

276628 Thanks! That really means a lot to me!

This chapter has made me crave calamari...

382967 I was gonna be like "Da Fuq" but then I realized... oh... Octopus... lol ;)

Yay new chapter at last :D

FINALLY! YES! NEW CHAPTER! AND IT'S GOOD!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

you are good to wright what's the problem in the streets. good writhing.

Something afull has happen in vinyl past. And only you know it. Keep up the good work

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