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Well into her career as the illustrious DJ-PON3, Vinyl Scratch suffers from a depression brought on by loneliness. Uninspired and coasting through gigs, she can't seem to find anything to fill a growing void in herself.
After opening up to new things and ideas, as well as befriending another pony, she begins to regain her inspiration and fill the void.
*Cancelled - Legacy work*
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This is pretty good I'll have to read more when you get more.
I liked it, but the sentences were kind of long and hard to follow. You have an excellent way with imagery, but I feel like your story needs more structure to make it flow properly .
I also don't like this Vinyl, but I don't think I'm supposed to, ha ha XD Fame has turned her into a whiny pony.
Tracking this!
201109 I think it would've had a different tone had I included a second character for dialogue. I wanted to write in first person, but I don't know what changed my mind. As for lengthy sentences, I'm not sure. I think I ended up sinking into a bit of repetition more than anything.
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Mhmm, I have to agree with you there. But these are all really easy things to fix too, just through editing.
201220 This story is more like, "Whatever I feel like," sort of deal, though I try not to be lazy in any of my writing. I'll write and update this when it comes to me, but TQP will continue its regularly scheduled updates regardless.
The drawl it gives off is kind of intentional (which is why I don't really relate to the woes of the reader in this case). I admit, it was somewhat boring to write, but that's to also emphasize the depressed feeling of Vinyl. I didn't expect to publish this at all so soon. I started with a tiny idea and have since expanded it into something a bit more. I'm already writing the next part. :P
I love how you discribe your sorrundings.
The story flows nicely, I wish I could make a story as skilled and seasoned as yours.
Now there is always room for improvment. But in my eyes this seems so awesome and skilled that I can't see where you can add improvment. It's got everything and it's extremly well rounded nice work.
Upload soon!
I wish this would update. It's very good.
375107 I've actually had the next part typed up for a while now, but I've been really busy and sick that I've neglected to finish its proofread.
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I love this story, it was actually the first I read on this site.
396343 Thanks, I'm glad you enjoy it. It's a nice change of tone and scenery from my other fic.