Tell me, have you ever wondered if...
Here I have a little something,
I'm sure you were not expecting.
Stories we all know,
all pulled from the show.
Done in a method I find endearing.
Good ol' Friendship is Magic,
told a little more dramatic.
A little rhyme here,
a bit of rhythm there.
All of it done as a limerick.
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I totally admire your aim
And I cannot resist this new game
An awesome endeavour
So cool... however
Some of the rhymes are a bit lame
And the work would be very much neater
If it followed a true limerick meter
I know it's not easy
(My work's just as cheesy)
But with effort it would be much sweeter
There once was a pony from Nantucket
When she saw an apple tree she would buck it
Then right from the top
The apples would drop
And all land neatly in a bucket
Is this all or is there more,
Applebloom made me hit the floor,
This is great,
And I'd appreciate,
If you looked at my stories of lore!
I mean to say
At any time of day,
Go look at my poems
I think you would love 'em,
And if you like My Little Poems and the second by the same name, then hooray!
3340758
I appreciate the follow
and yes, a few were hollow.
But some have changed
and been rearranged
with rhymes now easier to swallow.
3342670
I’m glad that I got you laughing,
and also apparently wanting.
I checked out your style
and it made me smile.
Don’t worry, more is approaching
You can call me a twit
Cause I cant rhyme for shit
But I never thought being a poet was all that cool
But I now know that I was a total fool
And my appreciation has now been lit
The idea is nice, but your pitch
Didn't quite go off without a hitch
The stresses are wrong
The lines are too long
And the rhyming, it made my eye twitch
You lack the required elocution
For this plan's correct execution
This tale I won't read
Or pay any heed
Till for those flaws you find a solution
3397800
I agree with this user
Because when I rhyme I look like a loser
Maybe a bit of practice would help
But I only practice when I eat kelp
:3
a good idea indeed
but to these words take heed
some lines are to long
with rhyming unstrong
I think time is all that you need
now I know that your slick
or you wouldn't do limerick
it wont take much time
to make this sublime
and become more than a neat trick
3355636
I find this all absurd
to speak as a deadpanned turd
though I must say
that profile pic must stay
Else I give you the bird
What say you of my pic,
Is it as magnificant as my fic?
I told a lie not worth a dime
Tis a joy to speak in rhyme
I might start talking in limmerick
This work you have crafted made my sides split
I applaud you your patience and wit
Late to the game
I love it the same
I'm ready to read more of it
The rhyming is a mess
But you did your best
It's all good fun
What's done is done
Now, on to the rest
I love a good laugh
The premise is daft
On my word
It's all absurd
This tale that you craft
Your meter is off but so is mine
I think what you've got is perfectly fine
Rhyming alone
Is hard like stone
So I am not going to whine