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AtomicMuffin


Oh! I didn't see you there. Pardon the mess. Make sure you don't step on my brilliance, because I know it's everywhere.

Comments ( 14 )

Well... That was different. I'm not even sure what I can say.

It was good though. Well, from a writing standpoint, it was a nice story. I'm not sure how I felt about the concept though.

Don't normally fav dark fics but this one piqued my interest.

3292432 Like the description mentions, I pretty much ripped off the concept (which may be a source of dislikes for being unoriginal). All I did was make it more intimate and immediate. Le Guin's story is more of a generalized observation with social commentary.

Honestly, I wrote this not worrying whether it would be well received or not. As long as it made you think and feel something, then I am content.

Thanks for reading. :twilightsmile:

3326386 Thank you. Love the name, by the way. :raritywink:

i know this is not a new story, but the last sentence reminds me of tyrion lannister

3386195 :twilightblush: I'm embarrassingly behind on Game of Thrones.

:twilightoops:
Well, I was introduced to this through the "Perpetual Discussion Group" as a "commentary on utilitarianism". I must say, I am impressed.
Duly liked and faved. (I don't know why there are so many dislikes.)

3408614 It isn't an original work. A lot of people don't like that I ripped off an original work so blatantly. Thanks for the support, by the way. :pinkiehappy:

Holly Smokes! that was good!:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:
Well done!

I read this some time ago and forgot to like and fave.

4012667 As long as you enjoyed it, that's good enough for me.

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