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Masked_Frenchman


I do this because I want to make people happy in some sort of way. I try my best to be a good writer so that I can brighter some one's day. Just one person who likes my work makes this all worth it!

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I don't know how many have written things like this about Death but this surely paralleling to my story.

3285144 I have a reason behind it, this is for something bigger, but I hope you were able to enjoy it none the less :twilightsmile:

Even though this is a writing test, please put in some backstory for Grim otherwise he is just another faceless avenger for good:pinkiesmile:

3288810 hahaha, you have no idea :moustache: This is not only a test story, but also part of something bigger, much bigger. He will be mostly unknown, but some background will be covered. You have my word :scootangel: For now, just follow the story and some questions may be answered, are are more than free to ask what ever you want and I will see if I can tell you what you wish to know. :twilightsmile: also, your picture is just so compelling and pleading, I feel as if I must do what you ask :applejackconfused: :rainbowlaugh:

:rainbowderp: :rainbowderp: I'm sorry, but this was AMAZING!!! :pinkiegasp: holy crap this is such a huge turn in your writing style, this is just a test?! make it into something real! the concept is a classical favorite of mine, a dark hero entering a town to slay evil with evil, the religion mix into it makes it even more intense, he is like a dark palidin or something, I actually had to look back to even notice the ONE silly mistake in this. So short, but I think we all just got a taste of something awesome! :ajsmug: i am so looking forward to this series :raritystarry:

3389382 after reading your name, I can see why :rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by randomguy8783 deleted Dec 25th, 2013

you got my atention just a question how many generatios are this from regular canon?

3686365 This would be right after Discord, but the era is in the industry era. After this they realized they shouldn't rely on machines to do the work for them and cleaned up, sorta speak. The best way I could think of to answer your question

men i like this story but i just keep thinking that this is like 50 years after regular canon at least but that not why i m here
i am here to present a challenge to you you know what a thresher maw is?
well i want you to succesfully make a story with a thresher maw as a character how you use it its your choice

3722852 no. . . .some one here actually watched that series?! :rainbowderp: *poof* new favorite viewer! :pinkiehappy:

3723009 the reason I have it like this is because the times changed. industry brings forth corruption, so in order to rid corruption, you have to remove the source, industry. I have read it in a few stories where time goes backward or forwards with technology and gave it a shot. I see I kinda failed with that concept. Fortunately this is an experimental series, although part of something bigger, I always expect my experimental series to fail, although they do really well. Also, this thresher maw, you couldn't be talking about the same monstrous creature from the Mass Effect series? I am horrible at combining things as is (just take a peak at Darkest of Souls, you'll see) And with a creature that depends on an atmosphere with no way to sustain life, why would mlp get mixed up in that? So although I am running low on ideas, I am gonna have to decline that challenge, this is just not physically possible for me, I'm sorry :fluttercry:

3723140 dont worry what i did say that to bring heavy industry to a town in orther to transform it to a big city it will require decades remember that ponyville as a town only got like 70 years or so in existence and equestria as a whole its not so advanced like a mix between the 18 and 19" century with some exceptions dont get me wong i enjoy the story but you just need to plug it right to the universe in this case mlp and the regular speed from a town to grow into a city on those values you must consider development births deaths and travel also how popular is in its country twilight said at the begining that ponyville its a quiet town so it cant grow that fast thats why it doesnt fit to me

3723140 dont worry threshy we will find you a new home look you make him cry :fluttercry:
hehehe

3723272 Opps, did I say that the town was Ponyville? I could have sworn that I avoided that. If so I see that I made a mistake then :derpyderp2:

THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME! This is a test?! Goddammit, this should be a actual story if you get my drift. Well done! I hope you write more stories like this in the future!
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::raritystarry::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

3743761 A test to make my fighting writing style better, and to test new writing forms. This story also holds a purpose though, it is a part of something big, quite big. The story is much different from what I normally write, so this is all very new to me. That is why it is a test. I also do not feel bad if some one says it sucks. This story is mearly a test, and experiment. I do not expect it to be good at all. The fact that it is doing so well surprises me quite so. So thank you, your compliment was quite heart warming, really! :twilightsmile: Also, you can count on there being five more stories like this, action packed with a little bit of drama. Some more than others. I will write them one at a time while writing chapters for One's Past is Another's Future. Trust me, if yo uguys like this story, wait till you see what I got cooking up in the works :ajsmug:

3800718 If he ever did. . . . wouldn't that be an interesting fight :ajsmug:

Those who sin all will be judged at some point in their life. When that day comes, may they know true fear, and beg for mercy from their god. For their will be none shown on earth.

5286245 Ah, you have a deeper understanding of Grim, huh? I'm glad some do :pinkiehappy: Now let's see who can figure it all out first! :trollestia:

5286266 Its due to the fact that I was raised on documentarys and books about history early. Knew about WW2 and its atrocities much sooner than other kids.

well then, the princesses may be found guilty after all

5394848 To fall to such insolence, they should just kill him and be done with it. Such a blight deserves no pardon and any true ruler knows this.

5395296 He is a co leader. If he dies, the others would go to war. They out power their military and out number them. Almost the whole city would go after them. That's why they bite their tongues now

5395703 Then slaughter them all, they have the power of the sun and moon, if they were a true leader they would kill all of them and any who would join they side. Then again Im a person who believes in the right of communism which would give the civilians the power to kill the leader if they did not do what was right for the country so Im a bit of living contradiction here.

5395958 Well Celestia and Luna are for the people. Many would die if they break the treaty and Celestia wishes to avoid that at all costs.

i was reading this and at the very end this had me wondering. Is this the Future of Equestria or is it the Past?

5400521 Technically, this is the past. Seems kinda confusing, I know but it's like a reverse progression sort of deal, if that helps any :derpytongue2:

5404650 I kinda got that when she mentioned at the end that A being calling himself discord was doing it.

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