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Shieldheart204 #1 · Aug 6th, 2013 · · · His Name Is Cross ·

Well, this chapter is definetly better than the last set. That much is clear. Now, I would recommend that you reset this story. Don't delete it, but you should really bring the old chapters back and post a new story.

I say this because your story needs a fresh start, to be free of all the bad stuff. It really got better. Just my advise, you'll decide whether you want to or not.

1000Fights #2 · Aug 6th, 2013 · · · His Name Is Cross ·

3001176
Your comment should be enough to satisfy.

Mystery Derpy #3 · Jan 5th, 2014 · · · Train Robbery ·

I like it moar plz

Deadinlight #4 · Nov 21st, 2014 · · · The Invitation To Dinner ·

i want more...pwease

Trithtale #5 · May 5th, 2016 · · · The Invitation To Dinner ·

This needs more... like right now.

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