Well, this chapter is definetly better than the last set. That much is clear. Now, I would recommend that you reset this story. Don't delete it, but you should really bring the old chapters back and post a new story.

I say this because your story needs a fresh start, to be free of all the bad stuff. It really got better. Just my advise, you'll decide whether you want to or not.

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Your comment should be enough to satisfy.