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Lost In A Vacuum


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..........umm....I can't.....TRACKING NOW MAKE MORE

As a true fan of KF, i can only say that this! THIS! WAS! EPIC! you got there personalities so perfect, and you described the situations so perfect! If you are gonna tell me this was your first fic ever, then i'm gonna be so jealous because i recently made my first and second fic of all time like yesterday. and my first fic sucked if you ask me. But enough about me! You are a beast compared to me! And if you ever feel like you wanna watch my fic then just go to my channel and give some critic, if you want. Rated 5 stars and tracked! MY dear sir! :heart:


........Ok.......I think i got a little over excited there......:twilightblush:

i love killing floor, i'll give this a read nd if it's good i'll track it.

hah, brilliant. especially the end part. 4 stars for you, 5 if the next chapter is this good.

Yes. Yes. YES. YEEEES!! So many zeds, so little time. This is truly a story that needed to exist by now. I'm looking forward to the Trader liking the big ones, heaps of dosh and many attempts at welding Equestrian doors. This is going to be awesome, I know it.

On a technical note, the writing itself is pretty decent as well, though I've spotted a few spelling errors, you might want to run the whole thing through a spell-check. I hope you'll continue this soon though, this is one of those crossovers that gets me downright giddy.

116963 Don't get too excited. I haven't even writen one word for the next chapter. What'll decide whether or not it's dropped is how much enjoyment people seemed to get out of it, though it might not get anymore exposure seeing as it's already kicked off the front page.
117005 Thank you very much for the comment. Well, (to your possible fortune) this is actually my third story, but I 'dropped' the other two before finishing them because I wasn't getting much inspireration for writing them. Hopefully the same doesn't happen here. BTW I just might check out your work. It's the least I could do for giving me such a boost like that.
117155 I'll try my best to stick to the good ol' fasioned 'goofyness' of KF, but I will try to make a serious piece as well. Just don't expect Lewis or Skully going around and yelling "DOSHDOSHDOSHDOSHDOSH!" anytime soon. (psst! But it's quite possible that a 'event' episode might wiggle it's way into one of the later chapters. Just sayin'.:twilightsmile:)

Thanks for all the feed back so far(even though this will probably be the only feed back for the next couple of weeks). I'll start writing the next chapter soon, expect it to come around next week or so. Cheers! :pinkiehappy: and bye.

117379

well if it's exposure just start making more chapters and people will follow. And if you REALLY need some exposure i'll put in a word for you :ajsmug: what i'm trying to say is just write and the rest will follow

YESSSS I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS FOR SO DAMN LONG THANK YOU

EDIT: very good chapter, can i have some details as to timing between chapters? like, if you have a set amount of time to when you release them or just do it whenever you feel like it?

But I like my dosh. :<

Great work so far :D

" Through the Fire and the Flames "

Haha! I see what you did there!

Finally refreshing my tracking list every 5 minutes pays off har har anway awesome chapter.

........ What happend to Caramel :rainbowhuh:?

407335 I'm sorry, I really am. It's just that I have seemed to have lost all or most of my inspiration for writing this, a really bad case of writers block it seems. Though I do have a decently sized portion of the chapter done, I still need to write a good amount more. I mean, I could just snip it off at where it is and give you guys another chapter, but then it would have no dramatic hook at the end, thus lowering the quality. All I can beg of you is that you hold on just a bit longer. Hopefully this re-installed just a bit more hope in this series yet. Bye. :pinkiesmile:

reading a guy beating the fuck out of a small army of clots to this song
awesome

426476 You have an epic taste in music good sir! :moustache:

I approve of both chapter and music:moustache:

The fun part is that i LOVE KF, but i don't have it :facehoof:

Yay! :yay: It's finally done! Feedback is welcomed as always.

654271 for so long i thought this story was dead thanks for proving me wrong

656993 For a moment myself, I thought this was dead. Thankfully, all I needed was a break, now I'm back in full(-ish) throttle.

657222 Great cant wait for the next chapter then

Love the writing style, but this is definitely for a specialized audience, for which I'm afraid I don't qualify. I feel like I'd need to read a Wikipedia article on The Killing Floor. Or better, watch it.

1089754

Well, in all truth, there is no story to Killing Floor whatsoever. All you really need to know is that the world is over, the streets are filled with murderous clones that never stop spawning, and the big cheese is this guy by the name of the Patriarch. I really don't think you need to know anything else, actually.

Well, actually, that's all you really learn from playing the game! But if it's not your cup of tea, then alright. See you around, then.

Don't forget, feedback is always appreciated! :pinkiehappy:

I can has pipe bomb pile?

1406360

Yes, but will that be enough to kill a man that's killed a god? :rainbowderp:

1407363
you gormless tosser!

Sorry about it being so short. It does have a reason, though. The only question is "is that reason good enough?". Well, that's for you to decide.

Expect another update in the next day or so.

:flutterrage: I am disappoint!!!
:pinkiecrazy: Where's the Steam Punk Squad?!
:pinkiehappy: They could have handle any situation quite well!
:pinkiecrazy: Still keep up the good work my good sir.


Ps.
:moustache: You are all fur coat no knicker B***H.

Well done well thought story! Also why u no use law/ husk / no introduce husk?

He took a quick glance backwards to see a shadowy figure, saluting him before walking behind a stack of rocks. He wanted to go back and investigate, but looked ahead to see that he had lagged far behind the other two. He picked up his pace and almost completely forgot about the character, though the eeriness of its mysterious ways subtly, but surely, ate away at the back of his mind. He had started thinking whether or not he believed in ghosts.

...Agent Wilkes?

Patriarch vs. Matriarch
GO

WHY HASN'T AGENT WILKES SHOWN UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUP

R.I.P.


HERE LIES MAD WORLD


13th Apr 2012 - 15th Oct 2012

"hint hint"

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