As a true fan of KF, i can only say that this! THIS! WAS! EPIC! you got there personalities so perfect, and you described the situations so perfect! If you are gonna tell me this was your first fic ever, then i'm gonna be so jealous because i recently made my first and second fic of all time like yesterday. and my first fic sucked if you ask me. But enough about me! You are a beast compared to me! And if you ever feel like you wanna watch my fic then just go to my channel and give some critic, if you want. Rated 5 stars and tracked! MY dear sir!
........Ok.......I think i got a little over excited there......
Yes. Yes. YES. YEEEES!! So many zeds, so little time. This is truly a story that needed to exist by now. I'm looking forward to the Trader liking the big ones, heaps of dosh and many attempts at welding Equestrian doors. This is going to be awesome, I know it.
On a technical note, the writing itself is pretty decent as well, though I've spotted a few spelling errors, you might want to run the whole thing through a spell-check. I hope you'll continue this soon though, this is one of those crossovers that gets me downright giddy.
116963 Don't get too excited. I haven't even writen one word for the next chapter. What'll decide whether or not it's dropped is how much enjoyment people seemed to get out of it, though it might not get anymore exposure seeing as it's already kicked off the front page. 117005 Thank you very much for the comment. Well, (to your possible fortune) this is actually my third story, but I 'dropped' the other two before finishing them because I wasn't getting much inspireration for writing them. Hopefully the same doesn't happen here. BTW I just might check out your work. It's the least I could do for giving me such a boost like that. 117155 I'll try my best to stick to the good ol' fasioned 'goofyness' of KF, but I will try to make a serious piece as well. Just don't expect Lewis or Skully going around and yelling "DOSHDOSHDOSHDOSHDOSH!" anytime soon. (psst! But it's quite possible that a 'event' episode might wiggle it's way into one of the later chapters. Just sayin'.)
Thanks for all the feed back so far(even though this will probably be the only feed back for the next couple of weeks). I'll start writing the next chapter soon, expect it to come around next week or so. Cheers! and bye.
well if it's exposure just start making more chapters and people will follow. And if you REALLY need some exposure i'll put in a word for you what i'm trying to say is just write and the rest will follow
..........umm....I can't.....TRACKING NOW MAKE MORE
As a true fan of KF, i can only say that this! THIS! WAS! EPIC! you got there personalities so perfect, and you described the situations so perfect! If you are gonna tell me this was your first fic ever, then i'm gonna be so jealous because i recently made my first and second fic of all time like yesterday. and my first fic sucked if you ask me. But enough about me! You are a beast compared to me! And if you ever feel like you wanna watch my fic then just go to my channel and give some critic, if you want. Rated 5 stars and tracked! MY dear sir!
........Ok.......I think i got a little over excited there......
i love killing floor, i'll give this a read nd if it's good i'll track it.
hah, brilliant. especially the end part. 4 stars for you, 5 if the next chapter is this good.
Yes. Yes. YES. YEEEES!! So many zeds, so little time. This is truly a story that needed to exist by now. I'm looking forward to the Trader liking the big ones, heaps of dosh and many attempts at welding Equestrian doors. This is going to be awesome, I know it.
On a technical note, the writing itself is pretty decent as well, though I've spotted a few spelling errors, you might want to run the whole thing through a spell-check. I hope you'll continue this soon though, this is one of those crossovers that gets me downright giddy.
116963 Don't get too excited. I haven't even writen one word for the next chapter. What'll decide whether or not it's dropped is how much enjoyment people seemed to get out of it, though it might not get anymore exposure seeing as it's already kicked off the front page.
117005 Thank you very much for the comment. Well, (to your possible fortune) this is actually my third story, but I 'dropped' the other two before finishing them because I wasn't getting much inspireration for writing them. Hopefully the same doesn't happen here. BTW I just might check out your work. It's the least I could do for giving me such a boost like that.
117155 I'll try my best to stick to the good ol' fasioned 'goofyness' of KF, but I will try to make a serious piece as well. Just don't expect Lewis or Skully going around and yelling "DOSHDOSHDOSHDOSHDOSH!" anytime soon. (psst! But it's quite possible that a 'event' episode might wiggle it's way into one of the later chapters. Just sayin'.)
Thanks for all the feed back so far(even though this will probably be the only feed back for the next couple of weeks). I'll start writing the next chapter soon, expect it to come around next week or so. Cheers! and bye.
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well if it's exposure just start making more chapters and people will follow. And if you REALLY need some exposure i'll put in a word for you what i'm trying to say is just write and the rest will follow
But I like my dosh. :<
Great work so far :D
" Through the Fire and the Flames "
Haha! I see what you did there!