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Masked_Frenchman


I do this because I want to make people happy in some sort of way. I try my best to be a good writer so that I can brighter some one's day. Just one person who likes my work makes this all worth it!

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Ponyville has been struck by a deadly plague that turns any pony that comes in contact with into zombies! Rarity is one of the few survivors left but she is running low on supplies and patience. With her sister upstairs she decides to end everything, this world of zombies, all of the horrific nightmares when ever she closes her eyes, the constant fight for survival, everything. With a final breath, she prepares to do something no sister should ever have to do.

This is a one shot story,I am stuck on my freelance story so I wrote this just for fun. It's not my best work but I saw the picture and decided to try an idea of mine. Just a quick read so enjoy it. Now if you excuse me, I am stuck on my Button Mash and Sweetie Belle Love story, and must get back to work trying to continue it, have a good day!

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Comments ( 31 )

This reminds me of TWD, specifically The Governor and Penny. Great story, I loved it c: :heart:

4390979 What does TWD stand for? :rainbowhuh:

4390987 The Walking Dead

4390991 Oh, I haven't seen it, wait so does that mean there is zombies who can break down walls?! :pinkiehappy:

4391008 SOME OF THE STRONG ONES SO WATCH OUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

4391024 How do you extend the sound of a 'T'? I've been trying it and it sounds like I'm cold :rainbowlaugh: still I might have to try out the series then, thanks. I'm guessing it's safe to assume their is no ponies in it? :derpytongue2:

4391048 Yeah, it's human based.
It's like
TUH

4391106 What does TUH stand for?

4391116 No, that's how you extend a T, with a "TUH" :twilightsmile:

4391157 So when you say it, it sounds like "SO WATCH OUTUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHH" :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

4391183 Hahaha, I like you, I'm glad you enjoyed my one shot chapter, and thank you for commenting, a shame no one else will comment but this was fun, gave me a good laugh! :rainbowlaugh: :pinkiehappy: :twilightsmile:

i couldve sworn ive seen this before and then there was an epilogue but i dont remember if it was here or fan fiction

okay i was wrong i was thinking of another story that had a similar idea to this, i found it
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/145602/1/everything-will-be-fine/im-so-sorry

4391856 Yea I checked it out, simular but not the same

Very sad story, but at the same time, very nicely done. :pinkiesad2:

4569975 It was a one shot story. I wrote it simply to get my creative gears turning, and it worked. Thank you for the kind compliment though :twilightsmile: but if you wish to see my better work, read either Button Mash and Sweetie Belle love or Pony of Death, they are my real working I am on at the moment :pinkiehappy:

4569987 I will give them a look see. :scootangel:

I was all like, " Wow, grim ending. " and, " Great story! "

I burst into tears. Rarity lasted a pretty good time if I say so myself. This was a beautiful story in my eyes, and makes me want to start my story that I have been procrastinating to begin

5848722 Oh, why thank you. This was just a little 'eh' kinda of thing. I was stuck on a story and I couldn't write anything for it, so I made this in hopes to get the gears churning, think that maybe someone will like it. I put absolutely no effort in it (as you might have been able to tell :rainbowlaugh: ) and didn't spend a lot of time on it. Thank you for enjoying it though, I am very happy to hear that :twilightsmile:

5848817 you are sooooo nice!!!:pinkiehappy::raritystarry:

5849161 Hahaha, well I wouldn't say that exactly :twilightblush: but thank you! :ajsmug: I follow the old ways of life: Treat others the way you wish to be treated. So I am nice to anyone and everyone I meet in person and online. It's still nice to hear it every once in a while, so thank you very much for the compliment, it was very thoughtful of you. I have been having a really crappy day today, so this really cheered me up. Thank you most ever so much for reading my short story, but I can promise you that the others are much better! :twilightsmile:

5849244 no prob! New follower, aka Me, aka Rarity H Discordia:raritywink:

5849577 hahaha, well I truly hope you enjoy my work then. I put a lot of time and energy on them! :twilightsmile:

You should be proud. You succeeded in making me cry. Not many people have done that to me before. Great story though! You earned yourself a follower! :fluttercry::twilightsmile:

GOD THE TEARS WON'T STOP
This was beautiful ;-;

Holy crap guys! :rainbowderp: I haven't even bothered to look at this story for so long, and it's gotten well over triple the likes and views from the last time I looked at it. Why? I mean for real, why?! :rainbowhuh: It's a short, cheap, one shot with an unoriginal idea and very little effort. I mean thank you guys, for real, I'm so happy you guys like this so much. . . . . . but it's just such crap! :rainbowlaugh: No effort what so ever, I didn't even bother to check it for grammar and such. As I said, it was just to get me thinking again, and some of you actually cried?! I mean no sweat, I cried to My Little Dashie (Who didn't, am I right?) but this? Did this really have the capability to make tears fall with so little effort? No, for real mind explaining it to me? I kinda wanna take down notes for future usage! :pinkiehappy: :twilightsmile:

Man...that really hit me in the gut the first time I read this...:pinkiesad2:...and the way that Rarity was talking to Sweetie Belle and Applejack in order to keep her sanity...that just made it even more painful:fluttercry:.

Rest in Peace Rarity, Sweetie Belle...may you and your friends find Happiness in the Elysian Fields...:ajsleepy:.

Most zombie fics usually ended up being adventure-esque or actiony vibe to it, this one ends being a pretty good tragedy one.

Good job!

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