I do this because I want to make people happy in some sort of way. I try my best to be a good writer so that I can brighter some one's day. Just one person who likes my work makes this all worth it!
Neon Rave and Random Guy are 2 close friends in high school just trying to get by. But one night while talking about their future they accidentally discovered a portal to another dimension. That once they went in, they couldn't get out. And now, trapped in the world of Equestria. Trying to settle in with their new lives, they must go out to look for answers as to get back to their homeland. But maybe this is home?
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When you do "Let's drop this base"
it should be "Let's drop this bass"
2841616 thank you for telling me that, I thought I corrected it properly this time, thank you for pointing that out thou
Loving your story.
great job on trying to connect the main events for the future, but you do have some spelling that I noticed. anyways though good job I'll try to update you for more of the main events in future chapters.
2896094 hush hush, don't let "them" know, we must keep it a surprise for them
still, I am glad you enjoyed this story, after all, this is your ideal 
Good stuff. Need moar of it
also.
take them they are yours
2901914 wow, thank you, I will make sure to write some more, seeing messages like yours really give me a boost of inspiration and confidence, I aim to please my fans (if I have any) ask, and you shall receive my friend
P.S.thank you for the gift, I shall gladly accept it
Best. paragraph. EVER
2937263 A personal favorite of mine as well so far at least
Neon gets his face in the ceiling often
3000077 name a chapter where neon doesn't get his face slammed into something.....
I spent... so... fucking long to read this....
3068108 sorry about that, I hope it was worth it for you thou, they won't be that long again, I promise, I just had to make sure everything was in their
good implementation of Death the kid
3068423 I didn't think anyone would catch that, nice one
I would comment legitimately but my writing hand is petting a kitty.
3125938 tell your kitty that the Masked Frenchman say's hi
Don't end it, Plz!!!!!!! I'd love to help with it if you need ideas. Just PM me.
Gotta love, son.
Hmmmm, interesting, Random can change his form? I wonder what that makes him, a changeling perhaps?
either way, I wonder what is going on in this story, I laughed alot reading it though, super funny 
you got some really good stories Masky (do you mind if I call you that, I think it's cute 
) I'm glad I followed you 
2937263 how did you do that? That box thing that is from the story I mean
Wow this was a long chapter, but it was a good read
I enjoyed it, so all those ponies that you met, are we going to be seeing them again, or were they a one time thing?
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, EPIC 4TH WALL BREAKING!!!!
That was awesome! still seeing some spelling mistakes, but I know that you are gonna be fixing them at some point, so it is ok for now 
loving how this is turning out! 
HA, loved this chapter, best one so far for this series! I love that Prince Blueblood finally got what he deserved, that cazzo stronzo!
Excuse my Italian, but I do not like him. Funniest chapter for this series by far and so many things going on here, a peak into Neon's past, Random making that promise, Shiva stealing books? 
lots of interesting things here 
I must say, I love your stories very much 
Oh my, this dark admiral seems different from the other or can they all do the same things? also is this gonna stop them from leaving? I really wanna know what is gonna happen!
3270452 Chapter 13 is on it's way, should be here tomorrow, so thank you for your patience, I hope you do not mind the wait.
Yet another good chapter, and let me cheer for your success so far. *inhales air*
3283592 louder
3284109 yay
3285848 Louder!
3286694 yay
3288433 LOOOUUUDDEEERRRRRRR!!!!!!!!
3290125 3288433 Hahahahaha, you guys!
Ok, lot's of things, one, YAAAA!!! Foureyes can really kick some serious flank! two, NOO!!!! the tower! How are they gonna fight King Sombra now? three, [from the beginning] again, you guys, checking out the "view" huh? 
must have been a good one 
four, WHAT IS EVERYONE PLANNING?!?! all these cliffhangers drive me so mad! 
I hate it, but I love it, I just don't know what to feel about it! ether way, loving this series! 
3290125 *deep inhale* yay
3290309 *falls over backwards*
3292572 *whispers* too loud?
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Deidara please don't ruin the moment!
R u going 2 write a chapter where neon and random guy go on a mane 6 rescue mission?