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The 'publish' button really needs a confirmation checkbox.

Marked it as read and read it so when it is finished I will kind of know without being scared to death by the surprise

Well that was a pretty big tone shift.

Quite satisfying! Poor, poor alicorns. Such hormones can be so confusing to deal with, I am sure.

Well. Until now, when the rumors become all too true.

Damn glitches. For some reason, this fic shows as updated in my feed, but when I go to unread Favs, it does not show up...

It DOES show up at the top when I view All Favs though.

Whatever... I must read now, cause I am hoping that the new chapter is as awesome as the 1st

make clop pls

I liked this. Very in character and I love your twilight.

...I guess she can use Celestia's magic and hoofs now.

I like it

"POMF"
"WHAM"
moaning

Luna walks by. Jeez you two get a room.

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Well, when I finish what I intended to be a single chapter, you'll see Celestia pulling rank on Twilight as crown Princess of Equestria, using her full authority to order Twilight to spoilers.

4161738 ha nice one. i did the same trick to my readers. seriously though, are you going to write clop of it?

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I'd say this is more [Teen] than [Mature], since there was talk of sex, but no blatant sexual content (be it description, or the use of words like "penis, cock, pussy, cunt, etc.)

It was beautiful. If I could I would upvote this again only for this chapter.

This was heartwarming.