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sbloom85


MSTifying ponies since 2012.

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Applejack and her siblings have been abducted by an alien race curious about their compatability with other species.

Applejack meets a human named Greg, an abductee who has been on the ship for over a year and sees her as an opportunity to finally escape the ship.

No sex, but it is mentioned.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 18 )

This is just brilliant. Just brilliant. tracking

Interesting, will see how this story goes, keep up the good work

so you have my fave and thumbs up

well it a new take to space hie with oc aliens abducting ponies, humans and other aliens! about time! the whole halo mass effect and other aliens cross overs don't really count.

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I'm glad to hear you like it.

3227841 i feel sorry he sound like a nice guy he had met and interacted with good and bad sentient etc and all that if it only been one year so far and all that happened to him it has to be tough for him and the others and only a matter of time before something worse happens to him and the apple's.
so how twilight and co taking applejack disappearance so far?

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It's only been a day, so they probably haven't given it a thought.

think they will ask celestia to sense were applejack is by using to her element?

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Anything's possible.

Need to separate the character's lines into different paragraphs. It's hard to tell who's speaking sometimes.

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I'll do that when I make the PDF version.

T'was fast
I'll be hoping the rushed story is worth reading

Aliens playing as god

so is there a sequal story?

3247218 As of now, no. Right now I'm working on a prequel.

so others can continue Greg's story in Equestria.

is this an invitation for anyone to write a Greg the Alien series?

3396049 Yep.

If and when you decide to do it, I've got a "Recursive Fanfiction" folder in the Abducted Ponies group. Throw it in there.

The premise and story was interesting, but the pace was too fast.

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