I'm St.Henry The Pig or you can just call me St.Henry...I'm a pig of dreams and nightmares...I'm neither holy nor damned...I am a pig...and this little piggy is all around, you just have to look again
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I liked it, thought it could have used some editing but overall not bad! Looking forward to more!
Good story, but you do need an editor or someone to proof read. There are punctuation errors and repeated words. Sometimes a sentence won't make sense. Anyway it is still a good story, keep it up.
Dr. X: It has potential, though it can be written much better.
Raven: Eeeyup.
3227172 of course I'm not the best but still thanks for the advice
3227394 thx for the advice
3227523 I'll work on it
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Dr. X: If you are in need of any help- Tips his hat -Doctor X is at your service, along with his-
Raven: I am not your assistant.
Dr. X: ....... accomplice?
Raven: Yeah, guess that kinda works.
(No Comment Accept Yes So i Shall Express It With The Happiest Cartoon Pogo Ever.)
3231785 Is that so well, then how do I that, if you want to help me how do I accept a editer
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Dr. X: Simple: You ask one to become your editor.
Raven: Eeeyup.
It's pretty good for being rushed. It's easy to understand at least.
I would watch you more except I don't have a face
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isn't this a crossover
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Technically...
Wow this story is getting good, but i feel like we could use some Shia Labeouf in case of emergencies.