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Chaotic Dreams


Writer, Aspiring Novelist, Animation Enthusiast

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Fluttershy was beginning to worry why everypony was acting like she wasn’t there—more so than usual—until she discovered that despite spending most of the day in Ponyville, she’d never even gotten out of bed. At least, her body hadn’t... Nor was it breathing...

Even if Fluttershy isn’t ready to give up on life just yet, The AfterLife is calling, and it isn’t patient.

Written by Chaotic Dreams and GaruuSpike.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 56 )

Keeping a watchful eye on this story. :rainbowdetermined2:

I get the suspicion I'll be seeing this in the feature box sometime soon...

Faved and upvoted! Aw yeah! Looking forward to more.

2110438 Fuck. Now I'm a ghost. :facehoof:

so... do I grab the box of tissues, the beating stick (for who ever "killed" Fluttershy- even if that means time itself) or the meh walking shoes (and walk away)?

Editt: tissues on standby, stick in hand. Let's hear your excuse Reaper...

Whoa. Poor Fluttergeist. :fluttershysad:

You've done a great job establishing a sense of dread. I'm definitely looking forward to more.

That was actually very interesting! I will be waiting to hear from the next chapters.:pinkiehappy:

I like how this is going:twilightsmile::twilightsmile:.
Are you going to tell us how she died?? Because I'm really curius :applejackunsure::applejackunsure::twilightsheepish:

Anyone else hearing that voice at the end (Death, presumably) as that of the late Tony Jay?

Can't wait to see if this is as good as Millennium Wake. It should be!

2113858 I have no choice but too hear it as that ever since he voiced Anubis in Gargoyles. One of the best voice actors ever in my humble opinion

Also awesome name by the way.

Now to find out how Flutter's died and see how her friends react. Should be good!

2116663 "The world is cruel, the world is wicked, it's I alone whom you can trust in this whole city..."

2116749 I don't quite remember that quote. Where's it from?

2116981 The Hunchback of Notre Dame: It's Jay's opening line from his song "Out There".

2118732 Ah gotchya. I always forget he played Frollo.

2119772 It's food for the mind.

Gem

2119772
Midnight? Pffft, 5am here in merry ol' England :pinkiecrazy:

2119909 iknow that feel mate:pinkiesad2:

I cannot wait for the next chapter, hope it's not gonna get even more sadder... :fluttercry:

Stay away from the Shadows!

ORLY?

And Rainbow Dash spills the beans. I wonder how many ponies will recognize poisoning? I mean maybe the doctors but the rest of the Mane 6 probably wouldn't. I mean Twilight reading up on the signs of poisoning almost sounds a bit creepy. Before hand, I mean. Afterwards it would only make sense.

To be perfectly honest... I hate the cover image. It creeps me out. Fluttershy needs eyes.

Love how this story is handled however. A lot of times when authors put information into the story they tend to suddenly go "descriptive" on absolutly everything they can. Here you seem to have told it from Dearly's perspective, and also avoided making it into a speech.

Fav'd Millenium Wake, for when I get to it... headache.

I can't let a routine haunting turn into giving the mortals proof of life after death... (beetlejuice)

Damn it when is this going to be updated? The suspense is killing me!

Some very interesting stuff here, between the various layers of postmortem reality and the capabilities of earth pony magic. I always figured Pinkie could do what she does through her connection with the Element of Laughter. A sort of humorous omnipotence: She can do anything, as long as it's funny.

In any case, looking forward to more.

Potential destruction on the material plane seems to be quite the impetus for a ghost to move on to somewhere less dangerous.

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congrats! i myself am in university right now, and i know exactly how hard it can be to get into a good one.

they took it to some clearing in the middle of the forest!

The soil of a pony’s heart is stonier; a mare grows what she can and tends to it.

DUN DUN DUNNNN!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

hohoHo, that's surely been an amusingly (to the readers) unnerving (to the characters) turn of event.
And I think that is one of the few times that I see a character's 'no time to explain' excuse being shot down by determination alone.

Whoa, possession? This story just got 20% cooler.

Ohhh Twilight you frustrate me.

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Oh boy, that beast is going to be fun to tame for my generation. :raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair:

Here there be Hollows?

I bet Derpy is going to get Possessed :D

Another brilliant story! Poor Fluttershy... I feel so bad for her...:fluttercry:

Oh, Twilight. So prone to confirmation bias. Honestly, you need to learn how to think like a scientist, girl.

Oh, and here's hoping Fluttershy's soul isn't devoured by negative energy beings from beyond the pale.

But seriously, Twi, gather the data, then make your conclusion. Not the other way around.

2198396 It's only taken me six weeks to catch up, but I finally did! I am liking the premise and the story. Shame that the Mane 5 are denser than tungsten.

Poor Rainbow Dash...I would love to see more of this!

Comment posted by GreenJay942 deleted Aug 10th, 2014
Comment posted by GreenJay942 deleted Aug 10th, 2014

This fanfic is great. I wish this can continue. If only there were more fanfics that are sort of similar to this. OCs or actual MLP characters.

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