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:rainbowkiss:"Trotting through the market after establishing her home, a little cirrus, a touch of nimbostratus and a dash of cumulus,"

Funny, Rainbow created her house with the same materials, order, and wording that Zeus used to create Pegasus in Disney's Hercules. I wonder why that is...

Agreed with the above. Do go on please, i'm curious. ...The Twilestia fan in me wants you to make a shot out to said, on seeing everything that happns in this chapter, but i'l not press the point. ...Though I would like to see it in hee. Following anyways.

Rainbow Dash wanting to be a mother seems kind off to me... but other than that I'm looking forward to more of this fic:pinkiehappy:

Tracking!

"a little cirrus, a touch of nimbostratus and a dash of cumulus"

I spot you there, Hercules reference ;) I wouldn't have thought that would have made a comfy home at all....

Nice story. Fan-fic is.. odd (as I think anyone will admit), but enjoyable, so long as it's not too ott (some things spring to mind), and so long as it's well written, like this.

As Many have said before, This is indeed very intriguing and I would love to see where it goes, track/fav from me. Also if you don't plan on revealing it piece by piece , maybe do a bonus chapter describing the night they had :twilightblush:
But of course I'll have to read and found out for myself :raritywink:

I Think I like where this is going. I won't track, but I will stalk, because this could easily be screwed up. Upvoted though. Good luck!:heart:

classic bait and switch on the father line, there. I nearly choked on my own saliva while laughing at that. :twilightoops: Keep up the good work.

Like the mundane details of the clinic and so on. Good for grounding the story, and the emotions you feel in a hospital or such are always in relief to the raher clinical surroundings.

261576 Well, thank you.:ajsmug: My mother was a nurse. So I tried to capture the things that most people miss when sitting in a doctor's office. I'm glad you liked it.:twilightsmile:

259676 :pinkiehappy: No, it probably doesn't make for a particularly comfy home, but it makes for a cute Easter Egg, don't you think? :scootangel:

Holy bucking crap, Heartbreaker. HOW DO YOU WRITE THIS GOOD!?!?!? GAAAAAAHHH!!!! I'm so jelly.
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I seriously can't find anything to complain about in this story if I tried.

When Rainbow Dash said Dr. Who I did a little dance of happiness. Yay for being obsessed with Doctor Who and ponies at the same time!

Well that was... interesting:ajbemused:

Still I enjoyed it, nice chapter and can't wait to see more:raritystarry::rainbowlaugh:

Where the buck is the next chapter! :raritycry: I just :heart: This series! :rainbowkiss: I don't know how much longer I can wait. I might go insane :pinkiecrazy: Keep doing what you are doing!

A bit of an odd story, but intriguing. I would love to see you continue it, despite the fact you haven't updated in nearly a year. Shame :(

I'm giving benefit of the doubt here and faving in hopes of a update in the next month or so

So, I mistakenly read the second chapter first (by the chapter names, I assumed that these were individual stories, not part of a single one) and I'm really glad I did. It really got me hooked on the story and it was like trying to piece together what happened to Rainbow at the party. Went back and read the first chapter and it filled me in nicely. Really looking forward to reading more of this (assuming that this does eventually update D:).

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