This first chapter is intriguing.

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hehe, Magical Lesbian Babies!

"Trotting through the market after establishing her home, a little cirrus, a touch of nimbostratus and a dash of cumulus,"

Funny, Rainbow created her house with the same materials, order, and wording that Zeus used to create Pegasus in Disney's Hercules. I wonder why that is...

Agreed with the above. Do go on please, i'm curious. ...The Twilestia fan in me wants you to make a shot out to said, on seeing everything that happns in this chapter, but i'l not press the point. ...Though I would like to see it in hee. Following anyways.

Rainbow Dash wanting to be a mother seems kind off to me... but other than that I'm looking forward to more of this fic

Tracking!

"a little cirrus, a touch of nimbostratus and a dash of cumulus"

I spot you there, Hercules reference ;) I wouldn't have thought that would have made a comfy home at all....

Nice story. Fan-fic is.. odd (as I think anyone will admit), but enjoyable, so long as it's not too ott (some things spring to mind), and so long as it's well written, like this.

As Many have said before, This is indeed very intriguing and I would love to see where it goes, track/fav from me. Also if you don't plan on revealing it piece by piece , maybe do a bonus chapter describing the night they had
But of course I'll have to read and found out for myself

When Rainbow Dash said Dr. Who I did a little dance of happiness. Yay for being obsessed with Doctor Who and ponies at the same time!