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Danny Fenton gets banished to a whole nother dimesion by the technology created by Skulker and used by arch-nemesis Vlad to teleport young 14-year-old Danny to a world of ponies, trying to figure his way back, while protecting the world of Equestria of the ghosts that follow him. Action ensuses. Stay tuned.
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You have piqued my interest. Reading.
Eh, you kind of skipped over the fighting.
Ok, first off: Get your tenses right. You're putting past tense and present tense words together in the same sentences, which is kind of confusing. You'll want to pick a tense and keep it that way for, if not all of the story, most of it. Secondly, why would Vlad even continue to bother with Danny after getting him out of the way in that other dimension. It also seems like the Apple family is taking Danny, what he says, and the whole situation too passively. I also have to ask why Danny would even bring up the whole part about eating meat. Danny should also still be using human pronouns like everybody and not pony pronouns like everypony... Unless some part of the trip affected his mind, which doesn't seem to be the case.
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I don't see why not, after all, he did take the form of one of them.
10478 I suppose you're referring to his pronoun use? Well, he might have been turned into a pony, but he's still actually a human. He'd probably use human pronouns because that's what he's always used. Or are you saying that the trip did affect his mind? If that's the case I'd think it's be a bit more pronounced than just making him change his pronouns.
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If the extradimensional portal morphed his physical appearance, I don't see how it couldn't have affected his habits, and vocabulary, involuntarily. i.e. how he didn't notice he was a pony til the vultures retreated, his sudden diet change, and how he said "everypony". When I said he became a pony, HE BECAME A PONY.
fantastic
While I like the idea, there are some serious grammar problems here, which Cador already pointed out. I couldn't even finish the first chapter because they just became too grating. Also, as he also pointed out, the introduction to Equestria went way too smoothly. Applejack and Big Mac would almost certainly be a lot more freaked out by what they'd just seen. And Danny would need a lot more time to adjust as well. They're all taking things way too much in stride.
Again, interesting concept, but you really need to clean it up before you continue.
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Things I'd like to point out:
The story is being told from Danny's perspective, and all he's ever seen so far is Sweet Apple Acres. So, as the story goes on, Equestria will be more introduced to him.
Danny just saved the two from the vultures, he took the form of one of them, so, you'd probably think they wouldn't have anything to fear except to what they're not used to, or have not seen at all.
>If the extradimensional portal morphed his physical appearance, I don't see how it couldn't have affected his habits, and vocabulary, involuntarily. i.e. how he didn't notice he was a pony til the vultures retreated, his sudden diet change, and how he said "everypony". When I said he became a pony, HE BECAME A PONY.
Y U NO MAKE MOR!
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Y U NO PATIENCE
I used to watch that show alot, and you did a pretty good job.
Only thing I didn't like is that you only have the one chapter right now....
Im goin to follow this ... my fav nick show with fav show....
please continue this story it seems like its going to be epic
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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because this is probably the coolest ‘going ghost’ transition ever
You sir have proven yet again that anything with danny in it is awesome so long there is no Slash
uh I HATE SLASH 
I wish to request that you update this story, because... I LOVE IT!!!! But has been almost 4 years that you have updated/ published the story.:derpysad:
i ask u work on pacing but other than that well done
too bad this story is dead
59292 when will it be OUUUT!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
Robert lutece: I must say, this story has caught my attention.
Rosalind lutece: Indeed it has. We shall wait for more, don't disappoint us.
Sorry for my annoyance, but seriously when will we get another chapter? I mean it's already been over 8 years and still nothing? Come on man the story is phenomenal.
Good Morning, Afternoon, Evening, to all who have waited patiently for the next part of this story!
Let me catch y’all up to speed of things in my life since the release of this:
I’ve graduated High School
Moved 8 times
Made many friends, lost most of them
Met the love of my life
Got married
Got a son who’s 3 and a half years old now
Now I’ve come back to say this:
Thank you for the continued support. I want to work on this story some more, however, I want to rewrite some things in this first chapter.
If you have any suggestions on what you want to be changed, other than spelling or grammar errors, I would very much appreciate it.
~Edgewood