He forced me to love him. Now my kingdom is gone. And I will have my revenge…no matter what it takes.
Princess Chroma had the perfect life. Loving friends, a wonderful family, and she had her eye on a stallion from the neighborhood. But that all twisted around when Cloudy Isle appeared. Now her life is in ruins, she has no home, and is certainly not a princess anymore. Alone and angry, Chroma's mind becomes warped and twisted.
The one thing she thinks of, desires, and dreams of?
Revenge.
And she will get it. No matter the cost.
Chapters (2)
Very nice... I see this story going far...
I assume that this Princess is going to turn out to be Chrysalis? (Well... obviously.)
Also, at this moment I make up 100% of your story's fan-base... It's good to know I was the first here, you are a good writer.
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Look! Marie has come to say hello! Without her cutie mark, for whatever reason, which is a gold star.
I love the story....but the princess in the book's name is actually Princess Golden Dream, and the stallion is Blue Dream.
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Then I guess it's some sort of AU. I don't know.
I don't plan on changing their names, though. 
3050503 that's fine. I love this, though.
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Glad to hear you do! Chapter Two is currently in the making.
Wow you actually wrote this! I never thought this idea would be taken very seriously... Yay!
(This is Fire Pendant- I just changed my name to match the one of my OC)
I'm very glad that you've taken up Spinner's idea! It'll turn out great, especially since her idea is in your hooves!
So far, this is turning out great! You're skill in writing is actually making me jealous!
Keep up the great work, Driz! Your writing has definitely improved over the years and I'm going to love following this piece to the end!
¡Más por favor!
Yet another awesome chapter! That did a lot of explaining. Thank goodness Marie was there to help Chroma out.
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Upon second review I have overridden the rejection of this fic from Twilight's Library. This story is solid so far, though a bit confusing if I may be honest. However the OC isn't Mary Sue, in fact you seem to be one of those writers that can actually write OC's well. I was concerned when I saw she was a Princess but upon realizing it wasn't of Equestria I liked the idea. Excellent work and sorry for the somewhat unfair judging of this fic
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