Throughout all of time, the species known as the vampire fruit bat has been ridiculed and put down as an ugly farmer's pest, or a rodent, or a piece of vermin that needed to be destroyed. Never have they been treated fairly, with kindness, and so never have they felt included, which eventually led to their downward spiral as a species in general. The fruit bats themselves believed they were never meant to be anything but rodents that ate fruit. It was just how life worked, and life wasn't fair.
However, when one group of vampire fruit bats is brainwashed to deny the reason they believe they exist, what will they do next? Is it possible they could become a civilized species as opposed to a mindless group of fruit-eating pests? And what - or who - could possibly help them achieve this goal?
DUN DUN DUUUUUUN
APPLES!!!
3699153 CHAN CHAN CHAAAAAAN (sorry, I've to )
Good idea there, kid
All Hail Queen FutterBat
This is going to be a good fanfiction. I can tell
Great story so far! I can't wait for the next update. Also, why is Applejack always yelling?
Oh, I like where this is going already. I can tell you've got quite a plan for this particular story, and I can't wait to see where it takes us.
Dis gun B Gud! (I think that's the internet-appropriate spelling...)
i dont get any of these references because I haven't seen season 4 yet
I can tell that this story is going to be good cant wait for the next chapter
THIS IS VERY INTERESTING!
You have my full attention!!!
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I love you for making this story, Driz.
Awesome!
aww, there's only one chapter so far .
Time to play the waiting game I guess. Very good story, Can't wait to see how it goes.
OOOOH! this looks promising! to bad I'm needing to sleep tonight. read later
Wow. I can think of an entire plotline for a different fanfic, yet I have trouble for my fanfic? Wow...
Nice. I'll now be waiting for the next chapter...
3699913 What are you waiting for?
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I want moar, and there's nothing you can do about it!
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So far this is well written and the idea is interesting. Hope you can update soon.
You have captured my interest Miss Quill. I am curious as to where you will take this story. I leave you with this gift expressing my feelings.
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3712517 I haven't had time to watch any of it. Im watching the marathon today but I have to work soon and i wont get back until its over
me want more
Mmm. Hooked.
I'm very curious to see what you do with this one.
~Skeeter The Lurker
You have my attention, you have my like, and you have my fave. I don't usually give those to a single chapter, so congrats.
Awesome! You definetly have my attention. Can't wait for the next chapter!
This... This story is one of a kind, I would know...
so scary
Pfftttt.
Well... At least you gave Angel more depth than "asshole"... Unlike so many others.
~Skeeter The Lurker
More please!
MORE!!!! she still has her fangs in the new episode. i got a pic of it
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Please share.
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Please share indeed. This I must see!
3735826 yes screen cap please
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OK, I thought I saw a fang myself when Fluttershy mess up that sowing, but when I checked again in HD I discovered she didn't in fact have a fang in that sheepish smile
What a terrible thing to do to poor fluttershy! What a ... actuallyy this isnt that bad of an idea... go on and write me some more.. please and thank you
well, that escelated quickly.
good so far, Will continue to read!
KILL THE BATS!! KILL THE BATS!!
Before they steal all our... uhm... hats? Cats?
I got nuthin.
3740132 I've seen you on other stories. You comment rp for Dr. Who
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yup, though mst of those comments you saw are from when my profile was a Yautja (Predator franchise). they don't make much sense otherwise.
*Grins* The description completely sucked me in and now this first chapter has sealed the deal. I can't wait to see where this'll go:)
Yep, Angel bunny is still sounding like a mob boss to me...
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Actually, the squirrel's name isn't "E." Angel has a sort of accent, so instead of saying "he" it's shortened to 'E, with an apostrophe in front. The actual name isn't given.
Angel Bunny = Steve Irwin in my mind
Do I hear... a Boston Accent?
that squirrel must of been so scared....
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He always had to me in fics that have him talking.
Also, Drizzle, nice work on the 41:1 like dislike ratio. You earned every positive contribution to it.
*grins*
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"Give dis squirrel a pair of cement shoes and toss'em in da lake"