Hey i used to be a closet brony. Told my whole family. Now they think that im gay its frikkin terrible! Well anyway love and tolerate.
Cloud the second Guardian is given a very long and deserved vacation after 900 years of battling demons monsters slaying dragons and rampaging through houses for rupees his boss AKA Author decides its time for him to rest but where cloud doesn't know but he will love it as the author said. Also I thank my girlfriend for the wonderful cover art (megustaed everywhere when i saw it)
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Hmm... despite the 'randomness' and style of the story & what's not, I found it amusing enough to give a track.
A break from seriousness at least.
I love this tracking
wtf is up with your OC's picture man? It's like you hit the 'random' button on the generator, then threw it in the blender and coughed it up.
freakin love it
272349 I'm glad you do i put alot of work into it and will be updating it daily-ish
Why Didn't you add lollytwist, the awesome teacher who gives suckers out and lets the kids watch movies all day in this chapter?
273356 Do what i want love! Deal with it
''Cloud the second Guardian is given a very long and deserved vacation after 900 years of battling demons monsters slaying dragons and rampaging through houses for rupees ''
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"Cloud the second Guardian is given a very long and deserved vacation after 900 years of battling demons monsters slaying dragons and rampaging through houses for rupees his boss AKA Author decides its time for him to rest but where cloud doesn't know but he will love it as the author said."
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But seriously, as many before me have mentioned, the character design on the right in the picture is absolutely horrid. The color scheme is uncreative, being the repetitive red & black that we see CONSTANTLY in OCs like this. Not to mention that he's wearing glasses, a vest, jewelry, and...a cape?
Really, the saying "Don't read a book by it's cover" can burn in hell because I'm pretty sure this story is nothing special at all. Again, think to yourself, when writing, WILL OTHER PEOPLE enjoy reading this story? Will it engage them? Really, because I have NO interest in reading this story from the synopsis and picture alone.
“This is the guardians’ blade. Now you may think im immortal but this is the one weapon that can kill me.”