• Member Since 6th Aug, 2012
  • offline last seen Oct 23rd, 2017

Luz


Hello! I'm an aspiring artist and writer from Honduras!

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In desperation, The Cakes send Pinkie Pie to buy some lettuce leaves for a salad. Not any ordinary salad, a salad specifically for the Princess herself! What could possibly go wrong?




Blame Cozmosus for this.
[img]http://i.imgur.com/s2dLylC.png[/img]
A collab with RaspingLeech and JerryTheHouseGhost

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 62 )

WAT

also i noticed sum erors

Add this to some groups breh.

I cri errytime I reed

The title of this story is misleading.

Dis gon be good. Like and fave. :pinkiehappy:

Luz

3237771 Where? :moustache:

3237793 I did. Thanks for reminding me.

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3237850 How so?

3237988 Thanks for your input :twilightsmile:

3238033 She never actually buys lettuce. But, now I see that it is marked incomplete.

Luz

3238074

Yeah, that'll be revealed in the future chapters :twistnerd:

Pretty good. My only problem is when you refer to ponies as "the pink pony" or "the fluffy maned pony" past their first appearance. We know their names, so use their names. Other than that, it's a good start.

3238221
Isn't that called Lavender Unicorn Syndrome?

Well at least its better that your 2 other fics but the sniper fic was ok

Luz

3238221

We'll try and fix that whenever we update it in the future. Thanks.

3239013

What sniper fic?

3239120

Oh God what have I done.

3239131

they one that YOU wrote by YOURSELF that YOU deleted

Luz

3239284

Evidence of that? :duck:

Comment posted by Luz deleted Oct 23rd, 2013
Comment posted by CyberCommand deleted Sep 22nd, 2013
Comment posted by Luz deleted Sep 24th, 2013
Comment posted by CyberCommand deleted Sep 22nd, 2013

FOOLS! You don't just use 'any kind' of lettuces in a Caesar salad! YOU USE ROMAINE!

Look down. What do you see? Deleted comments if front of me. Not one two or three. But several more than there need be. You called me a Dawn. Are you a fawn? You seem to be a hypocrite in front of me.

Luz

4262590

Who are you again?

To start with, you don't even know the contents of such comments, so I had them deleted anyways. They weren't neither criticism nor hate, just mere stupidity. And to be honest, their contents is none of your business. And to be a hypocrite, I'd need to have my entire comment page deleted, seeing as Felix Dawn usually did that. Check up.

4262834 I am the lost star. Enveloped by darkness. Even then when comments left me they were the same. My stories were not some game. Though you felt you could attack them in vain.

Luz

4262946

Alright. That's cool. If you excuse me, I'm just going to go over there and work on a story of mine. Ta-ta

Luz

4691625

You just reminded me that I have to update this thing some day

Thanks :moustache:

4691660
Oh hai! The story is incomplete! Never noticed that before...

Huh...

Luz

4691663

Just one more chapter though :rainbowkiss:

4691667
Fast reply? WAHT IS THIS MADNESS?! IMPOSSIBRU!

Yeah

This story is going to be great :trollestia:

Luz

4691670

More explosions and Pinkie being random :pinkiecrazy:

4691672
Pink yeah!

Explosions, abs, guns and MORE EXPLOSIONS!

Luz

4691673

And lettuce of course :raritywink:

4691677
With asbestos and day old radiation waste!

Gotta love the molecular raping chemicals amirite>?

Luz

4691680

I'mma have to think about that.

Radiation... huh, pretty nice idea.

4691688
What if the reason Pinkie was so different from her family was because her parents contrived her near a high radiation zone... like an anomaly!

Luz

4691693

Nah, it's probably because something hit her in her childhood (besides that one thing depicted in one episode.)

4691696
But what would explain her bright coloring? HOLY FUCK!! My head just smashed a light bulb! :(

She dyed herself pink because teenage hormones in Ponies do the inverse effect on them compared to humans! We dye ourselves black! They dye their selves pink and other bright colors!

It explains it all!

Luz

4691704

Or she just got high on candies too many times.

4691745
Her pigments changed due to the brightly colored sweets? Seems legit.

Luz

4691748

Too much candy canes.
extra extra mint flavored

Comment posted by Insidiaphilia deleted Jul 14th, 2014

4691759
Btw did I get the CYAGD correct?

Luz

4691765

Uh, not sure if this place would be appropriate for this kind of thing.

4691772
Oh well just me. This site has no standards :)

4691809
Oh well, I have to go to bed anyways over here it's 4:00 AM and I have a Doctor's appointment tomorrow

Don't bother replying to the comment.

Luz

4691814

Good luck on that appointment :rainbowkiss:
I reply on wat I want :rainbowwild:

4691822
Btw I technically mean't that morning if you think about it...

Anyways y u reply?!

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