[dead account] formerly known as IceboxFroggie, now known as Murmurpunk
A short prequel to a longer series I plan on writing, so don't complain about things like length or pacing. I want this to be the exposition of the whole series, so it's relatively short.
Go read the first official case file here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/120815/the-bureau-wretched-machines
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I could see this going in an awesome direction, but as I've told one of my friends on here before, its a better idea to post your story once you are at a point where things start to pick up. An intro is just an intro and won't get much attention. Its bad momentum, and isn't very appealing to most.
2949299 Exactly, which is why I'm almost done with the first part of this thing. Almost.
EDIT: The first case file (as I will call them, because I think it sounds cool) is now awaiting approval. Fingers crossed.
This line had me laughing out loud!
3945092 I'm glad you enjoyed it!
While this was good, it was too short for me to see myself faving it.
I'll read the next story at some point, though.