All over Equestria and its neighboring countries, war rages. Nations rise and fall as faceless soldiers die and their cookie-cutter families weep over drab graves.
Discord, the ruler of Equestria and one of the most influential people in the world, decides that drastic measures must be taken to end the war. To accomplish this, he collects the holders of the Elements of Harmony and their friends from around Equestria to give them a very important mission.
The mission? Kill the aggressors of the war, Princesses Celestia and Luna.
But once the ragtag group of heroes assembles and sets out, things do not go as smoothly as Discord planned. Tensions are high as the travelers try to complete their mission and try to uncover the truth.
Are Celestia and Luna the ones to blame? Will they complete their mission? Will they survive? Will they ever be the same?
I've gotta be honest with you. This feels a tad too rapid for me.
I had troubles following what exactly was going on, who the characters were and what role they had.
I'll hope the upcoming chapters slow down a bit.
Edit: Nonetheless, you deserve a thumbs up.
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This story needs way more likes then what it actually has.
This is really great. I can't wait to see what you do with it.
great story, bit fast moving, but good story
...but next chap. needs to be longer
ps. please make RDxTL paring
pss.and Rumbaloo
4264340 I've already decided on who will fall in love with who, but you'll have to wait and see if your predictions ring true!
4264352 well I hope my prediction is true-ish(and it was worth a shot to ask) hope to see update soon
Interesting so far. I do think that you need to expand a bit on each of the scenes, because the story's rushing as is. Other than that, I'm curious to see where this goes.
Wanna buy some weed?
XD
good story,it actually shows ponies in a different light than always "cute and fuzzy,and innocent!".