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TheDudeAbides


A guy that really loves futa. The dickgirl really ties the whole room together.

Comments ( 37 )

can you please not use ":" in chapter names? they always mess up the tagged downloads :twilightsmile:

Love the concept, dood... and I am familiar with C-D's Sonja and Malin; isn't Sonja a filly, like below the commonly assumed 'legal' age for sex, dood?

Just throwing that out there, dood.:twilightsheepish:

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First: Thank you so much for the comment, I'm a fan of your stories. :ajsmug:

Second: Canonically, yes, she is a filly, but to avoid problems I made her a year younger than Malin. I won't intentionally fight your canon that she is a filly, so you can just picture her as a dirty little filly while reading.

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Aww you made me blush, dood.:twilightsheepish:

Oh and thanks for the clear up, dood.:twilightsmile:

yes yes yes fuck yes.....

source link doesn't have pic source....

hnnnnnnnnnnng
i love this
jeez <3

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Cause the original source link I was using was taken down while this was in the submission queue, so I just quickly changed the link to C-D's main tumblr.

The originals are from here. I'll update it in a bit.

2952305 oh dang , thought you cropped that image :/ ....

Mmmmmm! I can't wait to read this!

Hot, hope the next chapter comes soon.

2955249 I'm thinking about buying prinny can I really be the hero and the second game in that installment.

2956720 All the power to ya, dood... It's pretty hard, still a good platformer.

2956723 I've played super ghouls and ghosts so that might give me an idea on how hard both games are.

Weird....in a good way.........not bad........good......I'll stop typing now

Hurry.... Can't wait... Give me more...

I see what you did there with that author's note.

Look who still lives. Nice to know that you're not dead in a ditch somewhere.


Oh and great chapter by-the-way!

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Look who still lives. Nice to know that you're not dead in a ditch somewhere.

How fitting. :applejackunsure:

Oh and great chapter by-the-way!

Thank you :3

I'm going to the moon for this, but it looks like by the views and the likes that I won't be alone :ajsmug:

This was an amazing chapter! Can't wait to read more once I'm horny again!

most cunny

should be "moist"

other than that, my boner is infinite

oh jesus that was beyond hot

I never really looked at those tumblrs until now.

Clop. Clop everywhere.

I'd actually like to see more about this one. It was surprisingly hot.

>overly dramatic smacking noises
"overly dramatic" seems without tact. "Exaggerated" would sound more appropriate.

>The metaphorical gears in her back creaked and lurched as she tried to move herself into an upright position
take out metaphorical; we're smart enough to know they aren't literal gears. If you really need to instill that it's a metaphor, you could say "the gears of her mind". That's traditionally how metaphors are used, or at least that's what I was taught.

>blistering heat
sounds painful

>But all that awaited her was an even more intense fire in her loins.
This is something everyone does, and I may have even done it in the past too, but man I just hate seeing arousal being compared to fire or heat. Burning isn't usually a good feeling to have around the genitals. :unsuresweetie:

>She was simply lost, no, she was adrift,
Put a dash or hyphen after lost, instead of a comma

>they would passionately kiss as he climaxed with herrrRRrrrr
That really disrupts the narrative. It might work if it was Sonja telling the story herself, through a 1st person perspective, but here it just feels unnatural.

>She have given the foot of the bed a fresh darkened coat of sealant, created by her own orgasm.
Should be a "had" in there somewhere
Actually, it seems from that line onward, this story went from past-tense to present-tense. Then after "oh celestia" it went back to past-tense. :twilightoops:

>burning sensation deep down in her loins.
I think that's gonorrhea, or maybe chlamydia. Either way, Sonja needs to go see a gynecologist if she's feeling a burning sensation down there. :pinkiegasp:

Overall, cute scene, but really hampered by some choices in diction.

> it was just like a stealth mission in Metal Gear Stallion!
:facehoof:

>Sonja batted at the sensually imbued saliva in her mouth, washing it around every aspect of her mouth.
don't need to use "mouth" twice in the same sentence

>younger mare motioned the tip of her tongue around her sister's urethra before lightly sticking the precipice into the hole.
>into the hole
>her urethra
>despite not being able to penetrate her sister's cock
:raritydespair: jesus christ, ouch! Not sure why you put borderline sounding in here, but I think that deserves a trigger warning!

>Sonja knew that Malin was not one to take things slow when it came to sexual endeavors.
how does she know this?

>to eep in surprise
Eep is not a verb.

Thankfully, the anal was particularly enjoyable. And surprisingly, the cum inflation wasn't terribly off-putting either, even though that's a fetish I can't normally into.

This is one of my favorite stories ever now. I want a sequel. Or three sequels!

6484998 ... Three sequels ? Are you sure... No, not three...


INFINITY!!!!!!

still love coming back and reading this every so often. its a great lewd fic.

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