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I kid, good luck with the ratings this time
Well, that was pretty fun.
Aside from one or two grammar and sentence pacing issues, beautifully written.
Overall, an A/5
Looking forward to more!
I don't understand why this hasn't done better? This was a delightful read!
I especially loved the part when Jeanne came to a trembling stop. I actually slowed down reading as I savored the words leading up to her whispered phrase - "I need to pee." And then Kat's great idea of them going together! 
That was hot! And, while I'm not huge into mare x mare clopfics, I certainly enjoyed this one. Even aside from the clop, I enjoyed the story and getting some more insight about your wonderful OC.
Your writing style is very nice and easy to read. There were some minor grammar issues and the occasional misspelled word, but nothing that kept me from immersing myself and enjoying this tale. I did notice you left the sex tag off this story. You might have gotten a few more views if you included that. Just some friendly advice.
Even with only one chapter, you've earned a fav and a thumbs up from me!
I look forward to more!
Update please this story was awesome!!
2465655 I would really like to see this story get completed cuz I loved the first chapter an I was wondering if maybe u could finish it jadextheshadowknight I know ur a very busy person but please think about it :)
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I'll have to talk to Jeanne's creator and find out what if anything he was planning. He may have forgotten to mark this finished, unless he had more in mind. Plus, Kat is someone else's OC, I'd need to get permission to use her. I'll talk to Jeanne's creator and ask about this. I'm still really swamped, but this would be fun to work on, if he was planning more.