Octavia's endowment

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jamlamin

jamlamin #1 · Aug 1st, 2013 · · · Chapter 1 ·

I do so hope that you remembered that true futa are hermaphodites; the word ふたなり literally means [to be of] two kinds. Well, we'll see after reading it. Best of luck to you. Also, first.

EDIT: Now that I've read the bloody thing, I can say, good show, and that all my concerns were for nought. There were some typos, in there, though, so you may want to run this through a spell checker. Grammar was above average, however, you seem to love long walls of text during the masturbatory scenes.
All in all, 8.79 out of 10, would read again.

Someguy987

Someguy987 #2 · Aug 1st, 2013 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

2971002 thought it meant dual form as both masculine and feminine

dethbyspork

dethbyspork #3 · Aug 1st, 2013 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Good job! Futa is a personal favorite of mine. Can not wait to read the full version!

Someguy987

Someguy987 #4 · Aug 1st, 2013 · · · Chapter 1 ·

2972810 don't worry about that, it's just a little dialogue between Daring and Tavi, maybe a little twist at the end .

DashyJ

DashyJ #5 · Aug 6th, 2013 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Erm... I suppose I don't fit in the not fitting in category but congrats on the success of the story!

Someguy987

Someguy987 #6 · Aug 6th, 2013 · · · Chapter 1 ·

2999099 Yeah, sorry about that. I wrote this in about six hours total at two in the morning. Quite obviously I wasn't thinking straight. You know damn well what I mean by that statement.

DashyJ