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What Stallions Want

Twilight Sparkle receives a book in a new shipment from Canterlot, and discovers one with an ominous warning followed by a very interesting spell

Pssst the picture's watching you

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Sib #1 · Dec 28th, 2012 · · ·

I see a cute concept in here, but it's bogged down just by the fact that every guy is thinking like a total dickwad. The end result is that the whole thing got predictable about half-way through. While the elevator music link did make me chuckle a bit, mean-spirited humor in general can only go so far before it has to branch out to keep the audience's interest.