When Twilight Sparkle and Star Shine are called away to Canterlot, the Cutie Mark Crusaders get the opportunity to earn their Foalsitting Cutie Marks.
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One word after reading description: Shenanigans
Oh Lordy, I have a feeling those three have bitten off more then they can chew...
LET THE INSANITY BEGIN!!!
Been waiting on thus for a while now and you have not disappointed in the least. So I in that vein...
Let the shenanigans begin!
So says I!
Why not just call cadence....or have Twinkle go with them to Canterlot and leave her with her grandparents
LOGIC! but I love this 
First reaction: Oh good, all hell's going to break loose and Twilight may have to murder some foals.
Not where I was gonna go, but I'm looking forward to it.
Also typos: Sweet Apple Acers, I saw a your where you need a you're, and there's a "thru" instead of a "through" ... also some grammar needs fixin (find an editor?)
Take your time; no matter the result we'll still love yah and follow this fiction.
update please
Just a small typo
You have choirs instead of chores
It'sā¦ IT'S ALIVE!!!
Good story so far.
<i>Unexpected turn of events</i> incoming!
Also I thought Twinkle Star was about the same size and age as the CMCs.
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For the purpose of this series of stories, as it sits right now, the CMCs are 10 or 11, and Twinkle Star is 5. It is the only way I could reconcile the fact that the CMCs are allowed to run around as much as they do unsupervised and be getting their cutie marks.
Great to see this. Could use a little more space between paragraphs but still very enjoyable read. Now don't you dare to leave this unfinished or I'll send
to find you. This story is too damn promising to be left incomplete.
I already broke my 'DO NOT FAV INCOMPLETE & UNDER 10 000 WORD STORIES' rule for this.
next chapter.
OoooooooOOOOOoooooooh ...... moar
oh boy... knowing the CMC this is going to go strait to hell .... excellent
wrong whether in this chapter
Shame this was discontinued. Definitely my favourite setup for Twilight's kid. Would have liked to see how her life is affected by Twilight being royalty, among other things.
Why didn't she just asked the Rich family, they already know her daughter, and their youngest is friends with her daughter
Ahhh... So not only the Apple blooms friends leave her to foalsitting, they didn't come help her out and instead went off on their own to get a cutie mark...
And now they have left apple bloom again and this time with twinkle....
If apple bloom doesn't want too see them again or be their friends after this I understand her.... Because they are really shitty friends
And I really hope that scoot and sweetie gets a hard scolding, from Twilight...
Other then that good story
Still great story really hope it will continue š