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Honestly... I didn't enjoy this.
None of the humour appealed to me, and I felt that the whole thing was hampered by a clunky delivery.
I apologize for not having any concrete criticism, but all I can say is that it read awkwardly to me.
Okay... I give up. What's the plot of this story?
This was pretty good in my opinion. Keep up the good work.
Lol... now this was entertaining. Twilight, always experimenting with new potions is fine, but you need to be more careful with them. Haha.. loved this.
No words can express how hard I laughed. Plus shining armour and cadence, golden!
It was funny I'll give you that, but it doesn't seem like a solid story. Just a lot of truths causing damage and gag value. Pretty damn funny though...
You know what?
People should write fanfics with Celestia tackling other ponies more often.
Decent premise, but ultimately the story is just a bunch of ponies insulting each other and then it ends.
OK I laughed hard. Also because of those idiots that put this in that other group I decided to go ahead and upvote and fave it.
2576490 Thank you. I appreciate that.
2576493 your welcome.
Gave it a fav. and an upvote on principle. Nopony has the right to trash another author just because they don't like a story. Yes I'll admit, I personally thought more could be done to it and I found it a bit too short. But all in all, for a short, funny story. It did what it was intended to do.
I'm sorry that this story put your other story on Hiatus. You are a good author and I'm definitely going to be giving your other stories a look.
2577895 Thank you.
2576490
I'm assuming you're talking about "Craptastic Stories"? If so, it's been removed since it didn't have the requisite downvotes to qualify. I don't know if it originally did and people upvoted it or somebody just didn't like it.
2581012 most likely That last one. all it takes is 1 person to put the story in there. this story and I saw like 2 ore 3 others had like 3 to 1 upvotes to down.
2581012 Actually it was a different group, but they finally took my story down last night. Maybe a moderator made them or they decided it wasn't worth the trouble. I don't know.
I gotta say, I was disappointed in this one. It was clunky, hard to read and had a lot of telling rather than showing. It wasn't all bad though, the reactions when some of the ponies realized what they said were pretty good. All in all, a fair little snippet that could use a lot of polish.
And did nobody ask the Doctor's name?
Haha! Very... Eventful! Loved it. So glad things are back to normal too. I can guess you want to leave it in the past, but I was worried this might happen to me when I eventually start writing. Now I'm not too worried, but if I need help, can I come to you? I know that sounds pathetic haha.
Great story!
It was like the triple G all over again... but with truth juice
well, have fun in magic kidergarden twilight
Needs some help in showing rather than telling, but the humor is good, and of course Pinkie's line sells it.
That was a great story to read, after all the sad things I read, this was a great way to uplift my mood~
Omg Lawl. I luved this! :) So funny.
lol so funny