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Sequel to The Monster In Apple Bloom Please read that first.

Apple Bloom is horrified when her colt friend Bright Heart tells her his heart breaking secret. Can her friends and family help her cope? Will Apple Bloom be strong enough to get through her most difficult time yet?

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 66 )


Why do you do this to me? :applecry:

Darn Cliffhanger! :flutterrage:, but now I am really feeling upset as much as Apple Bloom. :fluttercry:

:pinkiecrazy: i want more:pinkiecrazy:
poor applebloom:applecry:

Awww naw son, why you gotta do dis to me. I will find you and I will make you write more!:pinkiecrazy:

AWW... post the new chapter soon.
im guessing he is sick in some way.

2534279 Hee hee, I'm a female actually.

Heartwrenching yet beautiful chapter. Bright Heart is such a strong, loyal, loving, and caring gentlecolt toward Apple Bloom and he is showing the greatest of strength in not being afraid of the possibility of dying. Two years though, I hope he does find a match. :fluttercry:

*follows your advice and reads the 'prequel'*
"Okay...Okay,okay, okay..." *sniff*:pinkiesad2:
"Let's see what's up with this one...."
*reads the first chapter*
"Well, let me just..."
*horrible idea comes to mind*
*reads second chapter*
"I have a baaaaaad feeling about this. And I know that I don't want to be right about it.":raritydespair:

“I have a heart condition. My heart is weak, and I need a transplant. The doctor’s say I have a couple of years before it… gives out.”

Awww, son of a :applecry:*buy some apples*:applecry:! The bad news isn't what I thought it was, it's worse! :raritycry:

“I’m a very rare type. Finding a match will be near impossible.”

What type is it?! I gotta know!! :raritydespair:

2536582 AB negative just so you know.

2536674 Wow, that IS a rare type. :fluttershysad:

I just hope some pony in Ponyville willing to donate, Apple Bloom is finally happy! :applecry:

*cries uncontrollably * no.... shes finally happy.... poor AB *hugs applebloom* :'(

Beautiful and wonderful chapter. All seems to be going okay, that indeed their talk feels like it never existed. But the questions remains, could there be a doner somewhere in Equestria with AB Negative blood and heart? :fluttercry:

Fecal matter will soon hit the rotary cooling device...

Heartwrenching chapter, and such a beautifully sad poem by Apple Bloom. :fluttercry:

Bright Heart...is dead?
NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! :raritycry::ajsleepy::pinkiesad2::fluttercry::applecry::facehoof:
If you will excuse me, I'm going to go sit in the corner and cry. :fluttercry:

R.I.P Bright Heart
A True Gentlecolt

I was half thinking it would turn out he had gargantuism whitch is why he was as big as big mac..

So what happens now?
the story aint over? :fluttershysad:

Came somebody explain to me why this doesn't have more likes?

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttershysad::fluttershysad::fluttershysad::fluttershysad::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::raritycry::raritycry: (Insert other sad emojis here)

Seriously, though, great story. Your stories, plus Cupcake Chronicles, made my weekend the most feel-filled weekend ever. You are a great writer and I hope you have more stories to write.

Memento Mori,

I agree with Soniclink, this should have way more likes. A truly beautiful fanfic. I am so proud of Applebloom finally not letting depressing defeat her and living now for Bright Heart, her friends, her family, but most importantly herself. :pinkiehappy::fluttercry:

Tears of happiness shed hear. Indeed you are a great writer and poet. Never quit writing from your heart. Beautiful, beautiful story. :fluttercry::pinkiehappy:

Excellent Job! This is one of the best short stories I have ever read!! I can't wait to see what you write next! :yay:

R.I.P Bright heart. :fluttercry: why him..... why... poor AB.... my heart goes out to Applebloom and the family of Bright heart. Such a heart wrenching chapter. i never cried like this before. :raritycry::

With your permission i would love to do some fan art for this story. you inspired me to do so. :twilightsmile:

2548996 I can't wait to see it. :twilightsmile:

2549009 it may be a while i myself am working on a story

2549025 if ya want when my story is done you can look over it for me if thats ok with you

2549047 thanks a ton i got to go for now ok ill have that pic done in a jiffy :twilightsmile:

You updated this, and you didn't tell me:applecry:

The proverbial shit will soon hit the proverbial fan. Get your umbrellas

The proverbial shis is falling from the sky:rainbowwild:

U bitches better start hammering the like button. Or you gonna get cut.:pinkiecrazy:

I was watching Ellen with my mom and it said shutterfly wanted to give something to someone and I was all like

I want fluttershy to send me something

and the I had to explain being a brony to my mom:facehoof:

Cotinue on, for your stories are great.

Dark Heart was so cold :( poor Bloom!

Hardest thing in the world: reading the last two chapters in a crowded room without shedding tears :( was over too soon, but they were reunited in Heaven! Glad I'm not the only one who has a pony heaven in their canon!

Yourea great autuor, don't stop writing.

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF- Cliffhangers! :applecry:


Oh sweet luna my feels:pinkiesad2::fluttercry::applecry::raritycry:

Them Feels... :heart: :raritydespair: :pinkiesad2: :fluttercry: :raritycry: :heart:

I think 2 people mixed up Dislike with Dis I Like :pinkiecrazy::rainbowlaugh:

Even though there are a bunch of cry emotions, this one fits best: :applecry:

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