I've chosen to begin a new blog series where I look at the claims of trolls, haters, and ignorant people and pick apart their claims. I can't promise how regular or frequent this series will be. But I wanted to make a proper series with a straight-to-the-point name. In this series, I will also avoid actually posting any links or saying names. I don't want to give the people or groups any credibility, nor do I want my followers to mob anyone. If you know who I'm talking about and where to look,
Okay, god… that was a pleasant break from that. So, where were we?
In our last episode, Rarity wasn’t Rarity and everypony was an idiot. Death happened, and death happened, and then death happened some more. The author simply copypasted the show into the fic, then used a tired cliche twice. And then death happened again and Twilight forgot about it.
I am a writer. I adore criticism and creative improvement, and when I hear back from my readers I rejoice! Whether it is positive praise or critical evaluation, hearing from you is always a potentially eye-opening affair that I always look forward to. Now, the voting system in Fimfiction is not super helpful to that ideal in itself. I would love to know what you think about my writing. I want to know what you think, whether its praise or condemnation. I see all the up-votes on a story and
Last week we got to mix ponies with Indian food. A combination which can only work well. It’s nice to learn that our little equines’ diet is more varied than apples, oats, cupcakes, and hay fries.
For a breakdown of the format, don't forget to check the first entry.
Title: Of Angels
Author: PaulAsaran
Short summary: Angel Bunny learns to write from Twilight, for a reason that quickly becomes obvious. Told through letters/written conversations.
For today’s critique, I thought I would try something different. Rather than reading a new story, I took a story I had previously “reviewed” (by leaving a comment on it), and then rework that comment into a proper critique.
Our quest for coherent plot continues!
The description and title are some of the most important parts of a story. They provide readers with their first impression, convince them to read it, and characterize your story even after it is finished.
Today, we look at a set of stories, based solely on their descriptions, titles, and other relevant paratext.
The Alicorn Curse by chillbook1
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Let's first talk about the good stuff, because there's some good stuff. I really liked Henry Cavill as Superman. The effects were decent, even though sometimes it feels like Micheal Bay took over a little, and Jesse Eisenberg as Lex Luthor was A BLAST. He stole every single scene he was in.
Everything else, I didn't like that much. This is the first movie I walked out of thinking: "That was a bad movie."
The worst thing I ever seen.
In generation 1 magical ponies can grow their manes much faster than G4 characters.
Seriously don't listen to what big name critics say about My Little Pony: The Movie because they tend to be bought and paid for shills for rival movie studios like Disney and some of these critics just simply don't like movies that don't have political correct messages in them. However the only reviews you should really care about are those from the Brony community itself and so far the vast majority of Bronies and Pegasisters love MLP The Movie. Hell even people who do not follow the tv show
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