Below are two fanfic reviews based purely on the initial impressions provided by the first chapter (or first 3k words.) For an outline of what my reviewing guidelines are, go here. Please do not request reviews!
Out in the Cold by EsperDerek
Rating: Teen
Last fall, the FlutterDash group ran a contest for stories about FlutterDash and the four seasons.
It only had one entry (though HoofBitingActionOverload eventually finished his entry as well.
I had agreed to go over the winning entry and give the author feedback.
I never did, even though I put it on my “to do” list.
That ends today!
Yet again I've posted a new chapter, yet again it has gotten to the feature box (very bottom this time), and yet again it was quickly kicked out... I counted this time. It stayed there for 5 minutes...
I honestly thing I'm only getting there via technicality. It's been around for so long, after all. It's very likely that it really isn't as good as any other decently written fic, or even close to being popular to warrent a spot.
If [OPEN], I am accepting new requests. If [CLOSED], I am working on other things (check back later )
If you follow me, then you are likely aware of my ongoing review series. In order to mix things up a little, I am now taking requests for stories to review. Like everything in life, there are some caveats:
*Only request reviews for one of your own stories.
I came up with an idea I've never seen around here before. Problem is, not only does it center on an OC, it also involves one of my least-favorite characters in the series. Of course, one of the points of the story will be to give that maligned character some hidden depths, and also to have the OC be original, and not just a bland author stand-in. So, who wants details? (And no, it has nothing to do with the content of my last blog post...)
IN WHICH I WORK THROUGH THE ITIS
I had a big ol' Southern style lunch, so I'm gonna try not to fall asleep. No promises. Enjoy this insanity:
I think many of my readers are too young to remember Saint Ronald of Reagan and/or Genesis. Oh well…
So years ago back when DOD was still releasing episodes on Disney Fanatic’s channel, I created a fan child for Mothball and Screwball named Moatha and now she’s just sitting around collecting dust, which causes me to ask and pose this question: should I use her somehow in CreativeVerse? I’d love the input and feedback on what to do as I absolutely hate seeing characters collect dust.
I've been workshopping story descriptions for The Wayfarers, and will probably post some of them here soon. I'd gratefully appreciate some feedback on which you find more appropriate, or maybe how I could edit one to make it better.
Здравствуйте читатель, I have a small update for the amazing feedback I've gotten on Under Eternal Winds.
The feedback given was phenomenal and I have been taking notes, brainstorming and most importantly writing down what insights they've given me. I must give thanks to the couple people who were kind enough to comment or dm me their insights.
To those following Equestria Nova, I am sorry to say I am discontinuing it. In truth I took on the wrong mentality when writing it. I had decide to backhand Friendship is Magic which I am growing increasingly dissatisfied with as a series. I am also displeased with the course I had set it on for its conclusion which would have been a downer note. The biggest nail in Equestria Nova's coffin is I am completely divorcing my work from the Friendship is Magic universe. The creative choices that
I had abandoned Equestria Nova, because I found the reasoning for it to be faulty. I was kind of raging against Friendship is Magic and other things. Looking back, it was not my best moment. I abandoned it, and started looking at other possibilities.
Below are two fanfic reviews based purely on the initial impressions provided by the first chapter (or first 3k words.) For an outline of what my reviewing guidelines are, go here. Please do not request reviews!
Before I get into the reviews proper, I just want to note: The way I’m doing these is not random--I’m clicking on the last page of my to-read list, and reviewing the stories on the bottom of each page...
Okay, guys. I have a serious question to ask all of you. Are you enjoying A Tale of Two Suns Book 2? And more importantly: Do you want me to continue?
I know people have favorited it, and liked it, but here’s the thing: I published the latest chapter more than a month ago, and on the day that I published it, the response I got was lukewarm at best.
For anyone who sees this post, I'm proud to say the first chapter of my work, A Dazzling World, is coming soon! I submitted it today after extensive edits and I hope to see people's reactions to it~
Hello readers! As promised, my first Q&A session is ready to go. So let's just get into the responses I received.
RobKuro85
As you said, the current arc is nearing it's end, so what's next?
So I have sat long and hard on my stories and came to a realization. I have two stories that have no end in sight. Miss Martini and Apple pet
Also I have found myself at a loss on how to wrap up the confusing life. This doesn't mean that I have given up on them. Im just at a weird point.
Hey everypony,
Remember last week when I said I was thinking about participating in the November Writing Challenge? Well, even though my apartment move in date was moved back again (Facehoof), I decided 'Sure. WHY NOT?' and have been writing like MAD!
Below are two fanfic reviews based purely on the initial impressions provided by the first chapter (or first 3k words.) For an outline of what my reviewing guidelines are, go here. Please do not request reviews!
Fun Fact: I turned off “Show Mature” in my settings and looked at my to-read shelf. I lost five pages.
Another fun fact, I’m on my seventeenth page! Whee! Progress!
Now before I get into the heart of this episode proper, I want to address something. This particular installment encountered rather short first chapters/prologues, and both have quite a few chapters that follow.