I love to provide constructive criticism based on grammar, story structure, understanding of the characters, and plot. I read aloud using 1 of 3 different narration voices, which is what my pfp is of.
The small town of Ponyville is a source of strange things, but the stallion who lives at the edge of town is a mystery on his own. What does he hide in such a small shack like that? Why is he so empty? ...Where did he come from and who is he really?
Everyone gets scared of the dark sometimes. For some, it's fear of the unknown, but for other people, it's something far more sinister that frightens them...
It's Twilight's wedding day, surrounded by friends and family she's ready to be with the love of her life, after she stops freaking out over what could go wrong.
Wrapped in darkness, Fluttershy finds herself in an unknown place. Where are her friends? How did she get there? What's that scratching sound following her and why is she terrified of it...