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Rated Teen for sexual humor (even though it's only one joke).
It's Twilight's wedding day! her friends and family are all here, the love of her life waiting at the altar and she is...freaking out. Her worries may seem petty but she has her friends by her side to help her thorough it and eventually, Twilight Sparkle will walk down the isle.
Inspired by a dream I had.
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What was this dream about?
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If you read the authors notes at the top of the fic, it explains what the dream was.
This was a fun read.
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I'm glad you liked it.
This was so adorable!! I really liked the way that the mare Twilight's marrying is revealed slowly, and Twiluna is a super cute ship (even if I kinda prefer Twidash). Your descriptions really painted a picture of the scenes, and Discord and Fluttershy were super cute in the background. Also, was there some Spike X Sweetie Bell there? 'Cause the only ways that I can think of that Spike and Rarity would be sibling-in-laws would be if Spike married Sweetie Bell... Or Rarity married Applejack and then Spike married Applebloom.
One thing though--why is everypony immortal?
That was one thing that confused the heck out of me.
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This was a setup for an AU I wanted to do. Spike breaks up with Rarity due to work reasons, gets all mopey and the now adult CMC nurse him back to health after he spends a while wasting away in a cave. So really it's SpikeXCMC.
As for the immortality, there is a mention of Twilight fighting the Grim Reaper to save both Princess Luna and her Friends.
Much of this is an idea for an AU, I'll have to clean the fic up a fair bit when I get the time, typos and autocorrect blunders and so on.
I'm glad you liked it, I might expand on the ideas in this fic with a sequel or two when I have the time, maybe flesh it all out as well.
I’ll admit, I don’t really know how to feel about this story. The writing’s fine (save for the grammatical errors, which I’m glad you plan on ironing out) and I have no problems with the main ship of this. Yet, trying to shoehorn in other ships out of the blue, without having them add anything? That just seems unfitting and maybe even a bit desperate. No offense to you, the story itself is fine. But, the heavenly relationship status as well as the fact that it seems to be set centuries in the future from the show's canon just makes us feel as though we’re missing something. Give us some more insight outside of just the expositional dialogue. I understand that you plan on expanding it with future stories, and I’m excited to read them, but this story drops us right in the middle of the action without much context. It had some good romance stuff in there, the relationships were pretty cute, and the idea is very interesting. But, it can’t be so cute to the point where it’s just unbelievable, unrelatable, and just kind of...lame. I have also created stories and ideas that were based on dreams of mine, and I think this is a good example of your creativity! Just, don’t make everything feel so claustrophobic even after the panic has ended. Best of luck to you, though! Never stop writing, and I still enjoy this story very much!
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This fic is, in all honesty, a snippet of an AU. Something that briefly introduces a few half-baked ideas and a bit of world building with a few ships. I admit this would have been presented better if I had turned it into a multi chapter story with more world building and a slower pace.
I didn't want to do that though, too many of my fics are multi chapter stories and they've hit a point where either I lose motivation or life just gets in the way of updating them.
I will come back to this AU, flesh it out with a few more shorts perhaps but at least you found things to like about the fic, even if my writing leaves something to be desired.
Thanks for the comment.
Yeah, sorry. As much as I love the main ship, and despise with all my heart every other one, I can't like it. Idea is not bad.
But this should have been done after you got the au it's in going. Not before. Nothing makes sense otherwise.
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Eh, it was just an idea.