Love, such strange sentiment, I never felt felt it for another. But others have felt it toward me, even when I do not return it. If you love it set it free, if it loves you it will return.
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Debonair
If you leave a like and/or favorite, please tell me why, I want to know what I'm doing right, and what needs to be worked on. May the Horse be with you.
Debonair
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Liking this so far!
You also have a few errors you might want to look at... Otherwise, I am curious to see how this all plays out.
Good beginning. Can't wait for more.
im sorry. i like the story but when i saw the part where he names himself all i could think was: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TEV16VI2Zxs
2449728 I know it was cheesy, I'm a mule, Half Ass.
MY NAME IS MONARCH
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<-----er.... your character Skye.... I have to ask.... Did you just genderswap my image here?
2642232 no she looks like Trixie with darker hair.
2642989 then you may want to change the description slightly. Just saying she was a light blue mare with a slightly darker mane is kinda vague. try adding a length to the mane.
2643358 K
Errr... More background information and who is talking to who would be nice.
3390821 Sorry it's sub par. I've been a little preoccupied, my dad just had heart surgery so that's been on my mind more than stories, I'll add a little fluff here and there whenever I get around to it. Okay?
I'm liking it so far. Although, you could write in a few more details.
4080819 Thanks I do need to look over them again and add some fluff. i meant to do that last October but I got sidetracked
4087739 I understand. I hope to see this updated soon!
4087942 the next chapter's in the mix but it'll take some time for me to finish it considering it's only 250ish words ATM.
Really neat concept! Kudos!
a sound soul
dwells within a sound mind
and a sound body