a birthday wish has brought a human in equestria but has wiped out his memories except for basic knowledge his name and birthdate. this is confusing to him, and what will become of this human?will he get his memories back or will he live his life in equestria?
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the grammar is annoying but i understand because you need an editor but get one quick!
Hay bro, me and my editor will edit for you once I'm finished my story and had my editor edit it.
comments are welcome
ideas are always supported
if you have a picture for the story im happy to put it up and thank you for it
The writing is very...broken. You should try and make flow it a bit more sequentially, as opposed to cramming three chapters worth of plot into a conglamorate heap with no apparent backlight to it.
2368063 oh sorry i was making it at the moment i had the idea and thought i would start it from there. sorry just tell me where i went wrong.ok?
Man, you could use an editor. If I could be of any help, please message me.
anyone who reads this comment can you please tell me if you want chapters everday or every other day i'm really struggling on here.post a comment
Whenever you feel like, but keep it on schedule (Every day, every other day, 3 days, week) so that we can expect when it should be released.
You have two shift keys. Pick one and use it.
sorry get really lazy especially with the house work i do
2380702 See the latest chapters. Thanks to me, you can expect better grammar.
I think you can use this as your picture.
Wow your other editor is really good. Sorry I'm taking too long to edit ur first one but my uncle died
I have a message for your other editor, try not to use said as often cuz now from the readers point of view the frequent use of the word is very annoying.
hey hey it's ok kmdude if something happened then it's fine
i send you a message.
2386719 Noted.
sorry i'm not updating the story today because have a two page report
also on weekdays i will try my best to update, but the day i always update is saturday unless some thing comes up, and maybe sunday but not today sorry.
Oh I had a good idea! You should make a series of others who have used the portal to get to Equestria!
i'm back
so anyway my editor has not yet edited my newest chapter(10)so i will just post up my none edited one
it's gonna be weird
sadist ¡¡¡
2405238 what do you mean he is not a sadist but he get's hurt a lot because he's not used to equestria
>> pythorian oh come on, the first thing that happened to him is get burn (translate this from spanish, i can not say it in english)
Me parece un poco excesivo que justo al llegar le quemen, aunque la verdad es que es una sorpresa que hace más realista la lectura, con el comentario quería decir que creo que ya estas usando mucho el recurso de que el pobre chaval quede herido
2406667 pues lo siento que qres eso porque todo que le pasa es porque los ponies ayi locren aser un montro que los van a matar o algo.si no lo gusta perdona me
sorry spanish rusty
sorry that i'm late with the chapters i just have alot of school and i have to say every time i get home i'm really just lazy.
Dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
2457038?
friendzoned
? lol
2457692 yeah you know that the princesses can't fall in love with mortals
TOMORROW FOR SURE
pretty confusig to someone who are not english
I can not wait for the next, myth of humas should be cool
Dude
please
message me
please
I'll edit
please
:(
2492921 sorry dude just forgot
been busy all week i'll contact you later or you can mail me later.
hello to whom ever it concerns I will not be writing for a while I am sorry
please forgive me
(p.s. to my editor)
sorry I can't make a chapter for the next week or so
sincerely pythorian
hey guys i'm back sorry had to get a new computer dropped it and broke the screen anyway enough about me i'll be back to update the story so
too short
i need more ¡¡
2641721 sorry its just that when I broke the computer a month ago I got lazy so yeah need to keep working on that
sorry i am not updating the story but some personal problems have gotten in the way so i cant update for i dont know how long
sorry