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Stratocaster


Hello! My name is Stratocaster, pegasus, musician, and author extraordinaire! Feel free to browse my work, leave plenty of feedback, and chat with me at any time! :D I hope you enjoy! *waves*

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It was just a nice relaxing cruise for the Mane 6; that is until a certain pink somepony caused them to end up stranded at sea. Little did any of them know that they would be found by a ship captained by the most dreaded pirate in Equestrian history: Blackmane. He has returned to wage plunder on Equestria and once again rule the ocean. Will Twilight and her friends set sail and defeat the scourge of the seas? Yargh!

(not a crossover)

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 27 )

I'm back! :yay: Here's a nice adventure story to kick off my return! By the way, let me know if anyone has a pony version of a jolly roger. Enjoy! :pinkiehappy:

Hmm, well you have good enough grammar and syntax. There's a few mistakes, but nothing glaring. Your dialogue is generally faithful to the characters, which is a good thing.

I was sort of wondering why Rainbow Dash didn't go out and fly around and scout for land or anything. Or, why she didn't fly over to the ship and investigate it before they all got aboard.

Decent story so far, and gets a thumbs up from me. I might favorite it after I see where it goes.

wow I would do nothing like that even though I am Pinkies stallion counterpart

3180860 Thanks for the advice, I'll improve on the next chapter! :twilightsmile:

3232309 Thanks! About the nail part, I meant to say hoof, but I thought people would think it was her actual foot and not the nail-like end of it. Oh well, details details. :twilightsmile:

They..........ATE SHRIMP! THERE POINIES FOR CRYING OUT LOAD.

3248702 Hey, there wasn't anything about not eating seafood! :twilightsheepish: Thanks for the favorite, by the way, I was afraid people completely abandoned reading this one! :twilightsmile:

3277308 You're right, it is kind of cliche. But then again it's still more about defeating Blackmane than Shelly's problems. She's really just a side story kind of.

3321867 Hey don't worry about it. I understand getting critique. I'm not exactly Clive Cussler. But trust me, it's all part of the suspense! :raritywink:

Sorry this chapter came a bit late, 82 people who are reading this story. But don't worry! The real action will start very soon! :rainbowdetermined2:

3385764 That's a good point. But there's still something about the treasure they don't realize! :rainbowhuh:

Hey guys, sorry the chapter is kind of taking a while. Just want to wish everypony a happy Nightmare Night! :pinkiegasp:

Yo ho ho and a bottle of- eh, you get the picture. Thank you all for giving this story a chance! :twilightsmile: It may not be my best work, but I had to unleash my pirate side sooner or later! If I do start a new story, don't be surprised if I don't update for long periods of time. I've been pretty swamped with college work. :ajbemused: But for now, thanks again and go enjoy SEASON FOUR!!! :pinkiehappy::yay::raritystarry::twilightsheepish::ajsmug::rainbowdetermined2:

Awesome story!!! Too bad Spike was left behind.

3794694 Yeah, somebody had to stay behind and pet sit. Besides, he probably would've eaten the treasure. :applejackunsure:

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By the power of fanfiction, it is allowed. :pinkiecrazy:

The Elements of Harmony fighting pirates?
Didn't you know that they love people who commit murder and rapine for a living? Indeed, it's long been their dream to assist such endeavors, apparently.
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More seriously, thank you for remembering who the bad guys should be.

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