Silver Key has everything he's ever dreamed of. A wonderful life in Equestria, and he's engaged to a beautiful mare. But it seems like no matter where he goes, trouble follows. When he's suddenly thrust unwillingly into world of danger without Angel, he's forced to rely on his wits and talents to set things right again.
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Fanfic Adaption by: lunabrony
Originally Written By: lunabrony and PL
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It looks a lot like you've been deleting comments.
Please explain why.
I think the fact that there are more dislikes than likes explains alot
2424950 I deleted comments that were hateful and cruel and not in the least bit constructive. If people don't like my story, I don't force them to read it. They don't have to be nasty about it.
Boring story.
Maybe because the first one didn't make real sense to me and was full of the flaws I find repulsive in a story ( HiE who don't give a fuck about what he see, don't care about being changed into a pony, love at first sight with a pony, said pony is an OC Alicorn, become a powerfull Mary Sue unicorn, yaddah yaddah ).
I hand it to you the words count is good, the story seems descriptive enough, no wall of text and good grammar. But I don't like it at all.
Please consider removing this phrase. You know, a phrase like this is like pouring blood where there is sharks. You can attract trolls and jerks with it.
Now I agree with you: when someone sees a story, that person should read the summary. If it's clear he wouldn't like it, then he shouldn't read or comment. However, there is another thing: if he reads the summary and consider he could like it, then 'don't like, don't read' doesn't really works. It shouldn't be an excuse to avoid criticism.
With this out of the way, I really don't feel like reading it. It just couldn't pick up my attention, so I will refrain from commenting on it. The only suggestion I can give you is: you made this story with your friend, so both of you did it to have fun. Would you enjoy reading a story like this, but with characters that aren't you and your friend? If no, then you really need to think about why you published it on the internet.
Also be careful with Ponycreator: it usually brings downvotes... along with alicorn OC.
2436037 Thank you for your constructive critcism and telling me why you think the story sucks instead of just saying I suck. That was very helpful and I am appreciative. I agree with you and the phrase has been removed from the summary.
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You're welcome.
If you want, I am admin of a group named Love and Tolerate. We accept all OCs and humans fanfic there. If you desire, feel free to join and share your stories there. ^^
Hay, I haven't read your story (not because I judge a book by its cover, simply because I don't have the time now), but I wanna tell you that you shouldn't listen to haters.
They're called haters for a reason.
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Okay, that made no sense (but what fun is there in making
scentssense?), what I want to say is that you shouldn't feel bad about people hating your story. It's their fault, not yours. It's okay to like different things than you do. But appearently, they don't see that.I, for one, thought that it was a great story. A bit underdeveloped, but good.