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Charlie_K


Half the time I don't even know how I do what I seem to do so well. I try not to think too hard on it, for fear of breaking myself in the process.

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Rarity isn't exactly what she appears to be on the surface. She's hiding a secret about herself from everypony else for fear of what others will think of her should they find out. However the thing about secrets is they have a need to come out and be revealed. After keeping everything bottled up Rarity turns to the one pony in Equestria she feels can be trusted the most.

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Charlie, you've done it again.

This walks all the right lines to be interesting. It's not quite a comedy, and it's not quite a serious story, but then when you think about it, it's both. It almost fits in with Rarity's character too well. It does a good job of dissecting a character while remaining silly. I think that's the best skill you've demonstrated so far in your writing.

Anyway, keep it up.

Dear Rarity... I enjoy getting dirty too...

BOW-CHICKA-WOW-WOW!

...I am a horrible pony.

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