• Published 19th Mar 2013
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Chocolate Cake Shots, and Other Things You Discover in College - Flutterguy89



Follow the Mane 6 as they are re-imagined as human freshmen at Celestia College.

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Epilogue: This is Sappy but It's True

Epilogue: This is Sappy but It’s True

Clothing lay scattered around the room; thrown casually aside in the midst of passion. A particularly well aimed bra was dangling from a lamp, some pieces of clothing perched themselves on top of the desk, while still others littered the floor. Even the black brassier had eventually been removed and now lay at the foot of the bed.

RD was the first to stir, the warm rays of morning sun alighting on her face. She turned her head and gazed at the girl beside her. Fluttershy’s chest slowly rose and fell in time with her breathing, her pink hair, though matted from the night’s activities, still wreathed her head in a beautiful halo of pink. Dash was unsure if she had ever seen a sight more gorgeous or more peaceful
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With a small jerk Fluttershy too awoke and gave her childhood companion an exhausted smile.

“Morning Flutters,” Dash said returning the smile.

Fluttershy just lay there, looking upon the woman she had always admired. Her strength, her loyalty, and her passion had been what drove Flutttershy’s feelings for her one-time friend into a something more.

Suddenly uncertainty began to creep into Fluttershy’s mind. What were they now? Were they together? Did… did she even feel the same way? This had all happened so fast, what came next? A frown began to find its way across Fluttershy’s features. She fought back an urge to hide. No, no hiding, not from Rainbow.

“Hey, hey no frowning Flutters, got it?” RD cooed to her lover. She tenderly touched Fluttershy’s cheek as a way of comforting her. “Not regretting last night I hope, I mean… damn, you were awesome Flutters. I’ll be surprised if I can move out of this bed honestly.”

“No… no not that, oh Dashie, I’d never regret that…” Fluttershy responded softly. Should she ask…? Could she?

“I just…. I mean…” Fluttershy swallowed her words. She couldn’t do it, she was too afraid of what the answer might be.

Dash’s face became uncharacteristically solemn for a moment, “Uh… do you not want to, uh… be together?”

Fluttershy eyes began to grow wide, “Y- you mean it… you’d even want to… be with me?”

Dash’s face brightened instantly, “Of course! Are you kidding? I mean you’re the most amazing person I know, you’re cute and caring and well… you’re Flutters!” RD lunged and caught Fluttershy in a surprise embrace that made the more timid girl’s entire body blush.

“Thanks Dashie, I mean I really like you too.” She managed to squeak out.

“I know, I’m pretty much amazing.” Rainbow said with a smirk before planting a kiss on Fluttershy’s nose. “I mean… I’m no good at the whole feelings shtick… but when I’m with you I always have more fun, you make me smile, and well… I think… I think, I always want you in my life.”

Fluttershy smiled warmly, “Thank you Dashie, I want you with me too.”

“Plus if last night was any indication, I’d say we’re more than a bit compatible in bed.” She added with a wink. “I mean seriously where did l that come from? I never knew you could be so…uh… assertive.”

The timid girl resisted the urge to hide under her blankets. “Well, I um… thanks…” She managed.

Rainbow grinned, leaning and gave Fluttershy a playful nuzzle. “Well, just keep being you, ‘kay Flutters?”

Fluttershy felt warmth bubble up inside her. She reached over and pulled Rainbow into a tight hug pressing the lithe girl’s warm body into her own. “You’re the best Dashie!”

“I know it.” Rainbow let out a little chuckle and returned the cuddle. “So what now? Breakfast?”

“Sure ,” Fluttershy replied with a mischievous little smirk before ducking her head under the covers.

“Hey where are you going? I thought we going to get….oh! Oh, you naughty girl…”

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Several rooms away four girls were beginning to wake from what had ended up being a night of intense drinking.

Rarity rolled off the futon with an audible thud. As sleep slowly left her mind she stared up her temporary bed with a look of utter disgust. She picked herself off the floor and dusted herself off. As she bent over the Stetson that had been perched precariously on her head fell to the floor.

Twilight groaned as she rolled over in her bed. Putting a finger to her lips she issued a “shhhh” in Rarity’s direction.

Applejack rubbed her temples and winced, “Wellp I think I’ll be layin’ of the drinks for a bit… What in tarnation even happened?” She spied her hat on the ground and snatched it up. She cast a glare at Rarity, to have her treasured possession on the head of another was sacrilege as far as AJ was concerned.

A frizzy haired head poked out from over the edge of the top bunk. “I’ll tell you what happened!” Pinkies volume elicited a collective wince from the other three girls.

“Wh- what happened then, darling?” Rarity managed, her voice feeling rough in her throat.

“They all lived happily ever after, silly!”

Author's Note:

And he fumbles a bit on the dismount.

Yeah, I was planning on writing a bit more and calling this a full-on chapter, but then I realized that that was a whole other story. So I'll definitely be writing a sequel, but it could be a while

The title track for Good Thing by Reel Big Fish. Oh and here's a Rarity themed track too The Fear by Lily Allen. I know I never got around to posting any Twilight or AJ music. I'm working on a whole Mane 6 playlist that I'm planning on writing it up in a blog post, so if you're a fan be sure to watch for that

Thanks to all of you who have been wonderfully supportive throughout this whole process, this was my first fanfic and I am proud to think of it a bit of a success. It's certainly got me writing more!

Comments ( 39 )

2396169 Okay that's hilarious, but nope, apart from Flutters and Dashie no one else hooked up. That, as they say, is a story for another time :pinkiehappy:

2396294 Hmmm... Well I may write up a mature supplemental one-shot at some point, but no promises :applejackunsure:

i haven't even read the story yet and i can see it's a same sex pairing. pass. tho i am a fan of the artwork

I leave for a week and when I come back it's finished.
Not sure if :pinkiehappy: or :ajsleepy:

2399475 Eh, I had some time on my hands and some inspiration on where to take the story so I guess I just kinda wanted to jam it out before it got stale. No worries though, I am totally planning on a sequel. :scootangel:

Let me start off by saying bravo. :pinkiehappy: I've really enjoyed reading this and I am curious to see what you will be doing next. Don't know where you'd go with a sequel but I guess that I'll just have to wait and see. Go forth and write, good author. :twilightsmile:

2396404

That's quite judgmental, for an adult (likely male) who watches my little pony.

It's a pretty damn awesome story, my only disappointment is that I don't get to read more of it. :moustache:

Sincerely,
Fighting_oreo

2400103 acctually i'm a 23 year old female, see...assumtions are wrong. shut up. i stand by my choice. i never said the story was bad. i just said that i didn't wanna read it due to the pairing

2399666 Thanks for the love. I really enjoyed writing this and am so glad I'm not the only one who enjoyed the story.

Currently my plans for a sequel involve Applejack and Rarity competing for the hand of Soarin, the captain of the soccer team; RD decides to take up boxing, much to Fluttershy's concern; Pinkie Pie declares her setting up of Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash to be a success and decides to find someone for Twilight, but who is good enough for her bookish friend?

2396389 You just had to post sad Apple Bloom, didn't you?:fluttershyouch:

Well okay here it is: The Other Things

First time writing anything explicit, so I hope it's not terrible :twilightblush:

over all a good fic but i stills tand by they acted abit to college cliche and not enough how they are

N'awww, this was pretty cute! :twilightsmile: I really enjoyed this simple, sweet little story! :pinkiehappy:

:yay::heart::rainbowkiss: Nicely done!

2400111

I'm just going to point out that I never said that you were male, just that you may be. Read comments carefully before responding.

2407076 then you should stop making subtle hints about it being insulting but i'll let it slide. i do tend to read things fast because i'm working

2406613 :rainbowderp: uh... Hold on... One second... (Fanboy Squee!!!)

Ahem, okay. Thank you so much for the compliment, I would describe myself as quite the admirer of your published work. To say that your praise carries some degree of weight would be understating the point most egregiously.

In conclusion, omigoshomigoshomigoshomigosh!

2408405 :twilightblush: Oh, come on now! I'm not some revered writer here! I'm just a modestly good writer here. XD But you're sweet to say that, nonetheless. :pinkiesmile:

You're welcome! :pinkiehappy: It was a lot of fun!

Absolutely loved it and can't wait for the sequal :yay:

2417008 Not just a Lord of the Rings reference , an extended edition Return of the King reference. Congratulations on being the first to catch it!!!

Good story! A number of grammatical errors, but still overall good. :pinkiehappy:

I enjoyed this a lot. :ajsmug: I'm secretly hoping that the sequel will have Twijack because that is my next favourite pairing, but still, I'm going to keep looking out for more. Write more. :3

2455556 The songs are apocryphal, I figured maybe not everyone wants the links crowding up the story so I stuck them in the author's notes.

2455928 Thanks for the spellcheck, it's been fixed now :pinkiehappy:

Well, that was nice :twilightsmile:
Yeah, it definitely feels like there could be more to the story of these characters, so glad to see that there may be some sequels.

2460763 Guys can get away with those jokes, just not everyone finds them funny. It's not a matter of gender but rather a matter of sense of humor. Actually, this joke came from real life, where I asked a friend if his tie-dye doo extended to the basement, awkward laughs ensued.

2460784 See the next chapter, but suffice to say they are akin to "special" brownies.

I have NEVER read a fanfic that was THIS amazing! :heart:
But really, I have never read anything even CLOSE to being this awesome.
You need to write a novel. Or like, five. :yay:

2463200 :rainbowderp: Uh... thanks... wow, I think that's the highest praise I've gotten. Feel free to check out my other stuff, but trust me I am no where near as awesome as you seem to think I am.

2627112 Thanks for all the comments :pinkiehappy:

In this little universe I imagine both Rarity and Applejack to be hetero, but who knows what might happen. College is college after all. :raritywink:

:yay::flutterrage::yay:
My favorite fanfic!!!
:flutterrage::yay::flutterrage:

:fluttercry::heart::rainbowkiss:
OTP

Absolutely amazing... :pinkiehappy:

Definitely liked it a lot, especially because I have had a few ideas that use similar elements and devices on the drawing board for nearly a year. Clearly, I've not managed to sort the issues out so far.

I'd love a chance to pick your brain on your process and stuff sometime, if you would be willing. We also have a very similar taste in music and apparently television based on your other story, so I'm also afraid you are actually me from a mirror universe or some shit and talking would end time itself.

Spacetime issues aside, if you're willing I'd like to message you sometime and discuss things. Also, killer ass bands.

2724236 Man I need to remember to respond to comments more quickly. Um, hi alternate universe me! Are talking falling through a rift and popping out in a London with blimps and a President, or an improperly tuned quantum mirror?

Either way, hello! If you ever want to pick my brain, go for it! Feel free to message me or whatever!

Your story was crazy good.... good doesn't even begin to cover how awesome that story was..... well anywhoozles... when is the second one coming out?

i certainly do love pinkie she's just so awesome....jus come on, just when i was sure i couldnt love tha buckin pink energy ball more you come with this bucking story and love her way WAAAAAAY more

And this story is just so bucking crazy :rainbowlaugh: JAJAJA i love it :pinkiehappy:

HOLY BUCKING SHIT I LOOOOOOVE PINKIE PIE AND THIS STORY GREAT WORK XD WUUUUU /)

:flutterrage: SEQUAL OR UPDATE OR SOMETHING I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS BOOK :rainbowwild:

Best written Pinkie I have ever read! :pinkiehappy:
I like the secretly kinky Fluttershy :ajsmug:
Loved the story. :yay:
Chapters were shorter than I prefer, but then again this isn't an adventure-type fic.
Some typos, but meh...
Overall: I wish it was 14 times longer :scootangel:

It’s the only color you were missing…

That right there is my new candidate for the best FlutterDash quote

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