• Member Since 25th Dec, 2012
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silvergunner


The gothic furry everyone loves to hate.

Comments ( 18 )

:pinkiecrazy: I am going to hell in a hand-basket for this but....
:pinkiesmile: Mind if I ask for more my good sir?
:pinkiecrazy: We need more watersports.

2400704 I can't make any promises as i'm really behind with other projects. But there is a possibility of another chapter or three coming out before the end of the year.

2420628 :pinkiecrazy: Take your time and thanks matey.

:rainbowkiss: best day ever...

:pinkiecrazy: This is glorious! its a shame it ended so soon, but it was perfect.
:pinkiecrazy: Please keep up the epic work and you are now on my watch.
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:pinkiesmile: Hope to see more watersports in the future.

2451700 When you say "its a shame it ended so soon" in what way do you mean? Did any of the scenes go too fast, was there plot holes, was the ending too condensed, or is there any other problems?

(I'd love some feedback if possible, so I can improve my writing skills) :twilightsmile:

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- The End -

:pinkiecrazy: That end simply states the end of the fanfic (I hoped for more chapters).
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:fluttershysad: Quick end is less than 6 or 5 chapters.
:pinkiesmile: Normal 10 to 13 chapters.
:rainbowkiss: Good one 20 to 24 chapters.
:scootangel: Epic 30 to 35 chapters.
:pinkiecrazy: Holy shit! over 100 chapters.
:moustache: God like... never ending story.
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:pinkiesmile: Unless you mean the end of the chapter... then that wasn't necessary.

:pinkiecrazy: The story was perfect, the scenes sexy and well played.
:pinkiesmile: I didn't expect Derpy but it was still fun.

2464936 The piece was originally posted on my Furaffinity and Inkbunny pages as separate stories, and I just copy-pasted the text to save time. On here I decided to group them all together though for convinience.

Derpy Hooves was on a list of characters I had to potentially include in the story. Luna, Trixie, Rarity and/or the CMCs was considered, but Derpy sounded the most fun to write about as her lack of backstory gave me a lot of leeway. That and I thought anti-gravity clopping would be funny.

Yes! Finally another chapter and this one does not disappoint.

HOLY SHIT! :pinkiegasp:

That was great!

<3<3<3<3<3 AWESOME

Hot , kinky , I loved it <3

I'm glad everyone liked this story :heart: I recently restarted writing stories, so i'll try and do some more watersports clopfics soon :rainbowkiss:

Umm.........a-alrighty then...... Uh...... :rainbowderp: well..... Uh......I'm.....not entirely sure where to take this story to......uh.......
Yea.......I'm just gonna.....*slowly walks backwards* forget I ever read this.....sooooo.....yea...later.....*turns and sprints away*

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I'm looking forward to reading more of your watersports clopfics. :twilightsmile:

So much pee I'm loving it! To be honest, involvement of the CMC would have made it perfect for me. ^^

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Same here... I was hoping Apple Bloom would show up. Maybe not for full on sex, but a little bit of shy participation.

But even without her, it was another excellent chapter :twilightsmile: Nice to see Granny Smith get some love for once. But peeing in the clothes was my favorite part. I totally agree that doing in the toilet is a waste.

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