• Member Since 5th Jul, 2013
  • offline last seen Jan 2nd, 2016

BrunnenG


I mainly write weird stuff. Fimfic equivalent of how2basic

Comments ( 17 )

OOH
OOH YEAH!
RAINBOW DASH
DAMMIT YEAH
:derpytongue2:
OH YES
I CAME SO HARD TO THIS!

more please.

OP's title leaves absolutely nothing to the reader's imagination.

How the FUCK do people come up with shit like this? :pinkiesick:

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This is a story where Rainbow Dash pees in my mouth.
Fetish Fuel: Clop: Watersports

You are aware that having read that description you are in no way obligated to read the chapter right?

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Well like I said, I'll leave readers with no doubt on what they're getting into.
The only group you've joined is Austraeoh so how did you end up here?

3692667 Just genius I guess :coolphoto:

Thought it was just going to be some kinda, misspelled, broken grammer, crack story.






But it was actually pretty hot. Author, you are now 20% cooler :rainbowdetermined2:

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I was just scrolling by the new stories section looking for interesting stories to read. Then I ran across this and was compelled to comment based on the title.

Whatever floats your boat bro. I'm not judging you on your fetishes.

That's one hell of a fetish you got there, homeboy.

I upvoted this, because it was nice and.. though it could use some work was very readable .. and lets face it this fetish material is very rare on Fimfic ^^

After being teleported to Equestria by some magical bullshit that nobody cares about

Best. Opener. EVER.

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Thankyou very much. I'd love it if you could tell me where it needs work, I'm always looking to improve.

Won't be rare by the time I'm done.

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XDDD

3705718 Your welcome and that is good to hear ^^ As for advice, what I found is that it all feels a bit rushed.. perhaps that is because you are only seeing it out of one point of view...

On top of that out of a personal point of view, I like to have a bit more.. domination combined with this fetish but again.. that is purely personal.

Awesome! Not nearly enough water sports on this site!

"Please Sir, can I have some more?"

Maybe next time some femdom toilet play?

Eventually the cloud became very condensed and two weeks later Rainbow Dash gave it a good kick and it rained the remnants of her urine and my own salty cum down on Ponyville.

LOL :rainbowlaugh:

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because this is not comedy.

How do you know it's not comedy? Aside from the fact its not labelled as such. It may not have the gag quota thats required to justify fimfics comedy tag but a story can have a humorous bent, most of mine do.

but something about it just seems like you weren't trying to write this seriously.

Because I wasn't. It was a spur of the moment continuous flow. (hehe flow :trollestia:) I don't think WS needs to be serious.

At any rate I find it amusing that my avatar is an I quit notice and I have a massive I quit blog on my front page and I still get comments on a six month old story. Its actually my most active story.
I do love your commenters creed though. (If only we had more like that) It is certainly appreciated and if I ever find it in my heart to unquit I will take on board what you said.

Thanks.

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