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I mainly write weird stuff. Fimfic equivalent of how2basic
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Wut?
Alrighty then as usual a massive fuck you to the people who downvoted and didn't give a reason
You are bad people and should be ashamed. The title is the vore pranker so if you don't like vore stuff you can click on something else can't you, stupid heads.
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Lol. I don't get it either
I thumbs uped
Ha! Stay out of my shed from shed.mov.
This was hilarious.
I'm leaving a downvote. But before someone decries it's because of the content. It's not... I'm actually a vore fan. But this story needs a serious proofreading.
It flows worse than a clogged toilet after being used by a pred, and the characters don't feel right. Even by fap fodder standards. They feel like wooden stand ins.
In my opinion you could swap out the names of any pony involved, as well as the locations and nothing would change as it stands... And that's not good.
So here's my advice. Get an editor, have a chat with them about flow improvements and how to keep the story from reading like a wooden brick of text Then work on pacing. Then after that check to make sure if the stand ins thing still applies.
If it does you need to rework the dialog so they feel like the characters you're trying to use.