Here Comes Havoc

by elamentalwarrior

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Here Comes Havoc

Chapter 15 Welcome Home

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Pinkie Pie and I were now decorating the ballroom for Prince Terra's return party ,I used my magic to turn the floor into a light up dance floor with several disco balls floating in the air and a hundred yard snack table. We had to hurry an announcement was going to take place in the throne room soon.

"Hey Pinkie im almost done with the decorations!" I yelled.

"And me and Applejack are almost done with making the snacks!" Pinkie Pie yelled.

We have been working nonstop since we got back to the castle ,Twilight was checking down her list ,Rarity was making the others dresses ,Rainbow Dash was getting the sky cleared ,Fluttershy was working on the music.

"Hoo wee Havoc you really know how to decorate with style." Applejack said.

"Well I mostly just use my imagination." I said making some snacks of my own.

The doors opened up and Luna came inside. "Is the party set up yet?" Luna asked.

I looked around there was the decorations the catering and the entertainment. "Yes it is."

"Good its almost time for the announcement we must hurry." Luna said.

We rushed to the throne room Celestia and Terra smiled at our arrival. "Good your here quick get in place." Celestia said.

As we entered the throne room all of the ponies were inside and we took our place near the throne ,Celestia stepped forward. "Citizens of Equestria I am to inform you that Discord is no more ,and an old sibling of ours has returned please welcome Prince Terra."

The ponies cheered for the alicorn brother as he stepped forward. "It is great to be back and now I can join my sisters in serving Equestria I will watch over the land as I did long ago." Terra said.

Celestia motioned me to step my place next to Celestia she levitated a curtain to show a stained window of me defeating discord and freeing Terra. "But all this wouldn't have been possible without our new friend Havoc."

The ponies cheered for me I felt so happy then Luna tapped my shoulder. "Well say something." Luna said.

Oh boy I was not much of conversation but its worth a try. "Thank you all but don't just thank me I couldn't have done it without all the friends I made since I got here ,Before coming here I was alone without any friend or family but thanks to them all that has changed ,and I promise that I will protect them and this land no matter what."

I looked to the others and they were smiling knowing that the friendship I created with them was never gonna weaken.

"Now that we have this settled Pinkie Pie and Havoc will you do the honors." Celestia said.

"With pleasure Princess." Pinkie Pie said we put on pairs of sunglasses and took out a deep breath. "LETS GET THIS PARTY STARTED!" we both yelled.

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The party went on for hours The Main 6 were talking to Terra ,and Celestia was sneaking pieces of cake every two minutes.

"Connor!" Trixie yelled ,Connor and Trixie were sitting at a table they were sharing a piece of cake and Connor must have tooken the last bite.

The CMCs were dressed up in home made armor and were hanging out with BlackSector. "CUTIE MARK CRUSADER CHANGELING WARRIORS YAY!" They yelled if they do get those kind of cutie marks Applejack ,Rarity ,and Rainbow Dash might all faint.

Lyra was spying on Connor with a pair of binoculars as Bonbon just facehooved.

Spike was eating ice cream and cake like crazy ,hes going to pay for that in the morning.

And last Luna was outside the balcony looking up at the sky I walked out and stood next to her. "Its a beautiful night Luna?" I asked.

"It sure is." Luna said smiling at me. "And now with Discord gone it looks like you get to clame the throne as the new spirit of chaos."

I got worried at what she said. "Luna if I take the throne I might end up like Discord ,I dont want to-"

"Riles you are nothing Like Discord you are a great friend to all of us as long as were together we can keep Equestria in peace." Luna said. "The reason why the people of your world strayed from you was because they never understand your true potential but we do." Luna said.

I smiled and so did Luna we looked into each others eyes until Luna spoke. "Riles I wanted to say this for a while now."

"Ok what is it?" I asked

"I love you." Luna said.

My heart was beating hard but I knew that I loved her two so I went and said it. "I love you to Luna."

As our faces meet under the full moon ,we kissed knowing that we had the love for each other, and it would last forever.

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3rd POV [King and Queen]

Standing on a cloud high in the sky the King and Queen looked down at the new couple.

"See I told you they would make a great couple." The King said.

"Your just hopeing for grandchildren are you?" The Queen asked.

"Of course not im just saying that their perfect and that our son is back." The King said looking away.

The Queen laughed. "If you say so but if Riles never meet Luna who knows what would happened?"

"Hey we also brought the Conner person her to help him." The King said.

"If Riles meet Connor first them everything would go wrong." The Queen said.

They glared at each other and laughed at their little argument.

"Still it is great to see Terra returned to the family." The King said

The King and Queen smiled kept on watching the view of their kingdom, and knew it will be in peace for a long time.

THE END

Comments

[Shadowstrike2]

liked your story bro
is the gonna be a sequel

[Fucks Ungiven]

I liked it but you need to work on grammer but I liked it and fav it

[FuntimeBrony]

the ending is perfect write more stories like this

[geekmaster]

Good story, but you really need to work on your spelling and grammar.

[djponyfl]

good story.

[Chaotic Shadow]

Apart from having a grammar heart attack, this is definitely going on my top 10 list of stories.
Grammar (5/10) Maybe
Actual Story (9/10) At least

Totally could go for a sequel to this.
Many mustaches for you!

[Thule]

Okey... just gotta say that the grammar was terrible and way that you let the cheese rain way too much at the end, which came like a wild roadblock on the highway. go over it again or try to see if anyone want to go over it grammatically.
BUT... overall, the story was not bad. GJ!

[hs0003]

Story was good, grammar was awful.

[bin4rym4ge]

I think it would be a good idea to rewright this in the future, keep the story same just add a little more aaaaaaaand fix the gramer

[Th3 Torx]

I agree with those who have spoken before me, the writing is quite terrible compared to what I'm used to (grammar and spelling). But it's not the worst I have read, I give it a 4.5 on my scale from total gibberish as a one to perfection as ten. This scale is not linear so don't worry about it being under 5, all in all it's an acceptable quality.

As for the story it was kinda good, the writing brought my enjoyment of the story down and the story advanced faster than necessary. Then there are all the odd things like that insectobot thing (I have no idea what to make of it), references are nice in a story but unless you know what they reference you might have a hard time keeping up. Therefore they should not have a important part of the story unless said story is a crossover where you expect the readers to know about the subject, that way they can be easily ignored. My score on the story itself is about 5.5 or between average and good, keep in mind that it might have been higher if it was written better.

What I've said might seem harsh but in the end I enjoyed reading it so even if it could have been better it should still be considered a success.

[Hero of time]

Sequel?? Please

[NeovilusAlpheim]

Its... Ok I guess... By the way, I'm the 100th liker... Yay...?

[Dapper Guy]

I remember reading this once a while ago, glad I found it again.

[rainbowscratch27]

WHY MUST IT EEEEEENNDDDD!!!!!!!??????!!!!!!

[TheScrollChaser]

seriously needs a spell check, and some corrections, still overall a wonderful story.. but felt it lost a few opportunity's for chaos though that was more some thoughts I had to cause chaos.

shame though no flufflepuff jumping pinkie or fluttershy.

[elamentalwarrior]

6164643 Bite Me.

[Cerulean Rush]

In the discription, you misspelled Draconequus.

[Tranquility_Soul]

#draconequus now exists! please help it grow by tagging your fiction with #draconequus!