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Assassins Creed crossover ... unexpected.
The Element of Kindness learning to kill ... interesting ...
I have a feeling I'm going to like this story
Damn Dashie, you made me cry...
I knew I was going to like this story!
Why, why, why!?
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Supposed to be left in authors note:
Sorry about hurting Shy, guys/girls. As much as it pained me to do it, I knew I had to make bonds break somehow.
Damn, Fluttershy it wasn't your fault.... *sobs alittle*
Keep up the stories! I'm
likingloving it so far!Where's Discord?
Celestia turn herself in Solaris, your darkside like Nightmaremooon of Luna?
What Spike is making?
Yes! Go Fluttershy!!!
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Sorry about the wait everybody! I'm going to get back on track with this story as quick as possible!
There's a lot of run-on sentences. The clop chapter especially contains a lot of IKEA Erotica, but there's a lot of dull description in general.
Also, if any part of the story contains M-rated content, then the entire story needs to be rated M rather than T. Mis-rating stories is a reportable offense.
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Oops, my bad. Forgot completely.
Also, this was written a good bit ago, and I have brushed up on many things lately, as well as getting an editor, so sorry about all the bad shit in there.
If you think it will be interesting seeing fluttershy learn to kill then you should check out last of the dragonlords a great long story
An amazing story hopefully you will decide to make a squeal to this story and although you had some spelling mistakes I think this story still deserves 5 out of 5 hearts
moustache to you sir! 