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The Mirage


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I did kinda rush through chapter 3, sorry so many ideas are floating around in my head I cant keep them all inside...
I'm sure, if you write Fics you know what I'm talking about :twilightsmile:

the feeling of having so many ideas, just to sit down and try to type it out but go completly blank before you type. Shaking My Head. it sucks:ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy:

Amazing book mah friend! Bravo! Bravo! hope to see night flash soon :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

That you will sir

and thank you :twilightsmile:

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Thinking about adding a clop in here somewhere, but I don't think I'll be any good at it. It would be my first time :twilightsmile:

you kinda hit a soft part there in me.... that part about his wife dying actually made me cry due to relation to my life. but instead of a wife it was my uncle... i was spending the month at his house and well...ya. good segment. thanks for putting Night Flash in.:pinkiesad2:

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I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings man, :heart: and sorry it was so short he's gonna have a big part in the next update :twilightsmile:

922542 eh, dont worry about it. its was about 4 years ago... anyway thanks again for putting him in. good luck, if you need help let me know

Like a boss. nuff' said.
:ajsmug::pinkiesmile::rainbowdetermined2::raritywink::twilightsmile::yay:

Love this story so far!

Damn your OC reminds me much of myself. Troubled past, anger issues, and a self destructive attitude.

:pinkiegasp: OSHIT PLOT TWIST

:ajbemused: FUCKING CLIFF HANGERS!!!!! There better be a sequal

if I might make a suggestion? take Mirage, and write an adventure story. I would drown you in green thumbs. I have so many accounts that I could do it. I need an adventure story with him! :derpytongue2:

One of the best bucking stories I have read... Kinda. Can you read mine? Pleases?:fluttershysad: I'll do anything, just about anything really...:ajsmug:

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Thank you everypony for all of the nice comments it really makes me want to keep writing MOAR when I hear them :twilightsmile:

oh and moonlighteternal PM me and i'll tell you about the adventure story I have planned

You got potential kid great fic

Reminds me of actual me and oc me calm but insult anyone I like I get so pissed you cant stop me

* yells * VINYL WHAT THE BUCK???!?!!!!?
V: Not my fault... I hadn't known you yet...

Lol great fic brolo

BUCKING VAMPONYS ALWAYS RUINING THE FUN!!!:twilightangry2:

GAH BUCKING CLIFF HANGERS!!!!!!!!! HOW I DESPISE THEM!!!! I NEED MOAR!!!!!:flutterrage:

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There's a sequel of you don't know, it's called The War for Equestria

how long would that be??

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About as long as this one, it's on my stories if you want to read it

copy that i might just go read it

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Just want to say, you're doing a great job so far. Sure, there are a few grammar problems, you need to work on the your and you're thing, but the errors are small and hardly noticeable.
The grammar nazi that keeps sitting inside my head and talking to my two personalities gets really bothered by that.

Also, I know that chapter is probably out already, but I just noticed something.

One is able to control Space and Time.
"I'm the Doctor, just the Doctor. I travel through space and Time with this police box, I am from the planet Gallifrey of the constellation of Kasterberus(sp?), I am 904 years old, this is my tenth form, and I am a Time Lord, does that answer your question?"

Sorry, eccentric personality took over for a sec.

Yep! Multiple personalities!

This story...
It's amazing!
Keep up the good work! OP please deliver! MOAR!!
The briny with two-three personalities taking up space in his head commands it!

Also, not kidding about that thing with the personalities. If you would like a co-author, just PM me and the brony personality will respond soon.
Soon with my personalities normally means 1-2 days. They switch often.

HOLY SHIT? what dafuq LUNA!

So far so good. I am interested enough to continue reading this.

Well, that was a nice little chapter. I think that this was the first sex scene that I ever read with Vinyl in it. Congratulations with introducing me to THAT!

Boy, that escalated quickly. Great chapter. Don't kill off this great character!

And Shit has just hit the FAN!

This was a really good story. Now I am definitely going to read the rest of the stories that are in this series. Keep up the great writing!

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