Just want to say, you're doing a great job so far. Sure, there are a few grammar problems, you need to work on the your and you're thing, but the errors are small and hardly noticeable. The grammar nazi that keeps sitting inside my head and talking to my two personalities gets really bothered by that.
Also, I know that chapter is probably out already, but I just noticed something.
One is able to control Space and Time. "I'm the Doctor, just the Doctor. I travel through space and Time with this police box, I am from the planet Gallifrey of the constellation of Kasterberus(sp?), I am 904 years old, this is my tenth form, and I am a Time Lord, does that answer your question?"
the feeling of having so many ideas, just to sit down and try to type it out but go completly blank before you type. Shaking My Head. it sucks
Amazing book mah friend! Bravo! Bravo! hope to see night flash soon
That you will sir
and thank you
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Thinking about adding a clop in here somewhere, but I don't think I'll be any good at it. It would be my first time
Damn your OC reminds me much of myself. Troubled past, anger issues, and a self destructive attitude.
Reminds me of actual me and oc me calm but insult anyone I like I get so pissed you cant stop me
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Just want to say, you're doing a great job so far. Sure, there are a few grammar problems, you need to work on the your and you're thing, but the errors are small and hardly noticeable.
The grammar nazi that keeps sitting inside my head and talking to my two personalities gets really bothered by that.
Also, I know that chapter is probably out already, but I just noticed something.
One is able to control Space and Time.
"I'm the Doctor, just the Doctor. I travel through space and Time with this police box, I am from the planet Gallifrey of the constellation of Kasterberus(sp?), I am 904 years old, this is my tenth form, and I am a Time Lord, does that answer your question?"
Sorry, eccentric personality took over for a sec.
Yep! Multiple personalities!