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That's a cool picture if you wanted to write a story about Gilda, can't really see it working for Zecora though.
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It's for the OC, not Gilda, it picks an order for you
Cool story, will wait for more.
That...was...FUCKING AMAZING!!!!! You got gallant kid, can't wait for the next chapter.
Am I the only one who noticed the slenderman reference?
that bitch
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Thank you everybody!!!
and bosik: I'll get right on that, thank you
Nice! A new Griffon. Should be interesting.
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This looks like it was supposed to be two sentences. '(...) I should have known better than to ask her. She wouldn't (...)'
I'm not sure why this guy considers himself Gilda's best friend, when she's such a jerk? I doubt she would have acted the way she did in the episode around Rainbow Dash when they were at flight camp, or the two wouldn't have been friends. You mentioned that she had a soft spot buried inside, but then she just abandons him... I'm assuming we'll get more on her and how she feels about that betrayal later.
I'm also going to assume that she wasn't always such a jerk, that she's changed a bit in the past little while and he's hoping that she'll turn over a new leaf, and be the less jerky but still abrasive friend he had in his childhood.
It should be neat to see a story with a griffon as the main character!
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Thank you!
I'm glad people actually like griffins
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I'll change that right away, thanks for pointing it out!
whoa. thats pretty good.
Ok, first, it's totally unnecessary to expend 2 paragraphs explaining what cutie marks are and who Applejack is, coming from the narrator to the audience. If it was, say, Applebloom explaining it to Bronze, it'd be fine, because maybe Applebloom thinks griffons don't know about that stuff. But as the narrator, talking directly to the audience... on THIS website... you might as well be explaining how the Earth is round and orbits the sun, how the sky is blue, the grass is green, and stuff likes to stay on the ground because of this weird magical energy called 'gravity.' See what I'm saying? Stating the obvious.
Other than that, I'm loving this story, and w00t got an update on the same day!
PS. I think it'd be 'digestive tract'
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great fic girl, keep it up
This is amazing!
static.fimfiction.net/images/icons/thumb_up.png Interesting story, looking forward to reading more of it.
Love it love it love it. While im not all in the whole gilda continuity (I sorta nodded off during the episode) It actually does feel like it follows a logical chain of events and doesn't go too off character from what i know. Will definitely read the rest as it comes out.
Grammar time. At the end: I got my wings read for flight. Should be ready.
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The earth is not round, it is more oval if anything. Sky is blue? I thought it was more reddish and purple (that could be the evening talking). The grass at my school is brown. And stuff likes to stay on the ground because it hasn't been told it can go free by the all powerful being(s) that rule it.
Now about the story. Yeah I saw that coming when Zecora came around. I have yet to see someone do the rhyming for her well enough for me to like. At least you tried. Some people don't even bother and end all her sentences in orange. Still liked the chapter.
1125492 Herp.
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Is that all? I am disapoint.
1125540 Successful counter-troll is successful.
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I could make a comment on how the troll face you posted is backwards but then we would be here all night and i don't think anyone wants that.
1125572 And I could point out that I did that on purpose, but like you said...
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Okay then night. Oh and by the way I just wanted a yammer back and forth, not a fight. And you gave me my yammer
!!! Thank you!
It was fun!
Edit: they need more emotes...
I miss this story...