The first book in the Cyburst Origins Trilogy.
Cyber burst is an adveturer. he's brave and a good looking stallion. he gets all his money by selling old artifacts to museums and collecters. But, how did C.B. become an adventurer in the first place? This is the story of his first adventure into a temple that can only be seen on the summer solstace in the Everfree Forest.
This is my first Fan fic and I'm going to wait and see your comments for ALL of the chapters before I make another adventure.
UPDATE: Since I have been given permission, this story will have recurring themes from the timeline of the stories made by
BlackMirage.
Chapters (5)
You overused "Darling" just a bit
but otherwise, I'm interested!
Bravo! Bravo!
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Yeah I notice that when I started to read more of other peoples stories
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thank you
Since the story was published at 12:26, there will not be another chapter until tomarrow
It's just good to see that people like my writing
Nooooo Cliffhangers!!! Noooo
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Gyahahahahahahahahaha!
*clapclapclapclapclapclap*
CybeastHunter found:
da faq is
Love it. Take my favorite.
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Thank you thank you
I know it s not a popular fic but it was recommended by a friend and that is usually how I do these and all I have to say is Darling is overused but its still good. My ratings are 1-5
and then an 
but I have other ratings if you earn them
okay 1.FIRST for the first time and now review for chapter its an interesting story the plot is appetizing to say the least and how does Rarity fit into all of this hmmm anyway thsi gets an
with high expectations
Oooooh shits gonna go down and I agree cliffhagners tick me off but still its a good story and it gets
with a 
at your amazing storytelling style
AHAHAHHAHAH that las sentence and am I gonna be 1ST every other chapter even tho I'm happy about it that ending gets an
(5of those is my best rating)
NJ due to my reviews you should now what 5 moustaches means this is an epic story here have my favorite as well with this
I am immediatley reading your next story
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thank you, nopony's really payed much attantion to this story
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wel I was told to read this and they are good at paying attention
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Who told you?
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a friend A.K.A my boss he looks for writing styles and has people copy them and use them for stories of a completley different nature so don't worry about me ripping you off